"Poetry from the Broken Heart"
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Comment from Raul1
This poem is interesting and entertaining to read. It has dark humor of the man who was drunk and lost his girl. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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This poem is interesting and entertaining to read. It has dark humor of the man who was drunk and lost his girl. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Fleedleflump
Your image of memories chattered is beautiful and effective, and I like that you then carry that sad image forward into future with the holidays never to come. When bodies, lives and hearts shatter, it's always going to be a long term battle to rise above it but we carry on and we find ways to cope. This was lovely.
Mike
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Your image of memories chattered is beautiful and effective, and I like that you then carry that sad image forward into future with the holidays never to come. When bodies, lives and hearts shatter, it's always going to be a long term battle to rise above it but we carry on and we find ways to cope. This was lovely.
Mike
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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This one made was something very important to me.
About one out of every 200 I feel that way.
Thanks for stopping by again Michael and have a wonderful week.