Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice 1-6-1 poem you have penned about Strawberry Cake. You used very good words and very yummy imagery. Strawberry Cake is one of my favorite cakes to have on my birthday! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022

Many thanks

Comment from Michaela Moore

Good

The drawings are precious. I understand your poem and it is wisely constructed with your huge syllable and line constraints. I just feel like it a poem with enough weight to it for more stars. My humble opinion only. What might fix this and would be ever so simple to do is leave the poem alone, but construct a more meaningful title. That's how I get more punch is tiny works, My titles are so intragle.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022

Thanks for the suggestion.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This is great advice as my wife of 53 years will not even prepare long-time favorites without peering first at one of her many cook books. Baking a strawberry cake is not an easy task. Rod

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022

Thanks Rod