Some of us vs. The rest of us
Human race in action26 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Charity, I've missed you. Either I haven't been looking or you just haven't been writing. Whatever the case, I love this one. Your aggression and anger have been tempered as you wade through the myriad of circumstances all of us (or some of us) endure at one time or another. I can relate to most all of them (after 73 years I should be able to, haha) I have been, in many cases, on both sides of your rhyme, or one or the other. You have deftly cornered a big percentage of the human experience and done it with ease.
Thank you for another gem.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Charity, I've missed you. Either I haven't been looking or you just haven't been writing. Whatever the case, I love this one. Your aggression and anger have been tempered as you wade through the myriad of circumstances all of us (or some of us) endure at one time or another. I can relate to most all of them (after 73 years I should be able to, haha) I have been, in many cases, on both sides of your rhyme, or one or the other. You have deftly cornered a big percentage of the human experience and done it with ease.
Thank you for another gem.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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You welcome. I appreciate you being a fan.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Some of us vs. The rest of us, proves that none of us has the right to judge. You covered many of the ills of the world, and have given us all something to think about. Thanks for this post.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Some of us vs. The rest of us, proves that none of us has the right to judge. You covered many of the ills of the world, and have given us all something to think about. Thanks for this post.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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You welcome.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
What a marvelous read! You covered so much regarding the complexities of the human race. Your style is always unique to me. I don't care for rap music, but on occasion I do find out how clever a lot of the wording is in that style. If I had the chance to read rap instead of listen to it, I probably would. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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What a marvelous read! You covered so much regarding the complexities of the human race. Your style is always unique to me. I don't care for rap music, but on occasion I do find out how clever a lot of the wording is in that style. If I had the chance to read rap instead of listen to it, I probably would. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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That's interesting. I'm glad you like my poem.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Charity a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing that poem with us, it's a good description and depiction of the many facets of humanity and our conditions.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Hello Charity a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing that poem with us, it's a good description and depiction of the many facets of humanity and our conditions.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Thank you. Stay safe.
Comment from karenina
Hey Charity... Thanks for sharing your latest poetry slam link. I shared it with a lot of folks on and off the site!
Your rare ability to say it just as you see it, calling out all the hypocrisy, is so damn good!
That comes through even MORE when you're performing your artistry...
We're all so much more alike than different!
When people stop judging and instead lend an ear...or a hand...
We'll have hope!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Hey Charity... Thanks for sharing your latest poetry slam link. I shared it with a lot of folks on and off the site!
Your rare ability to say it just as you see it, calling out all the hypocrisy, is so damn good!
That comes through even MORE when you're performing your artistry...
We're all so much more alike than different!
When people stop judging and instead lend an ear...or a hand...
We'll have hope!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Alot of people are saying my work is even more powerful when I perform. I appreciate your support and for you sharing my work with many others. Much love.
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Your words are powerful and passionate-- Your performance of your poetry is electrifying!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A stark truthful write viewing the world in black and white with no grey areas here. The ups and downs of life, the choices, and the fate we suffer at the hand of wrong decisions, you included it all here, an unusual write bringing some home truths to us all, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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A stark truthful write viewing the world in black and white with no grey areas here. The ups and downs of life, the choices, and the fate we suffer at the hand of wrong decisions, you included it all here, an unusual write bringing some home truths to us all, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem glows well with unforced rhymes.in what seems to be spaced out rhyming couplets. It does show a cross section of society and reminds us not to judge others
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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This poem glows well with unforced rhymes.in what seems to be spaced out rhyming couplets. It does show a cross section of society and reminds us not to judge others
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your honest view.
Comment from Raul1
I think that we are entirely different people and have different successes. You have penned well this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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I think that we are entirely different people and have different successes. You have penned well this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Wendy G
Each of us is different, and none has the right to judge another, as no-one else has walked on that person's shoes. Some do seem to have more than their share of difficulties and hardship, and others the opposite. Lot od fine and perceptive observations. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Each of us is different, and none has the right to judge another, as no-one else has walked on that person's shoes. Some do seem to have more than their share of difficulties and hardship, and others the opposite. Lot od fine and perceptive observations. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture. The world is full of people but no two persons are alike.
Their background, their education and their behavior are different.
You have done an excellent job to list their differences.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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I like the picture. The world is full of people but no two persons are alike.
Their background, their education and their behavior are different.
You have done an excellent job to list their differences.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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I appreciate your feedback.
