Dainty Dancers
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
I don't know. I like what you wrote but in my neck of the woods, daffodils come out not long after the new year begins. Ours burst through the standing snows.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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I don't know. I like what you wrote but in my neck of the woods, daffodils come out not long after the new year begins. Ours burst through the standing snows.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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I don't think they would survive Minnesota winter temps, it can be as low as 30 below here. I've only really seen them in spring and early summer. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Dainty Dancers, has the right setup and catches the daffodils doing a jitterbug as the wind breeze through to set the tone.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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This 3-5-3, Dainty Dancers, has the right setup and catches the daffodils doing a jitterbug as the wind breeze through to set the tone.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Melbelles
Wow, the way you painted this in my mind was stunningly beautiful. Honestly, this kind of took my breath away. I will take this imagery into my dreams. Thank you for this beautiful piece! Good luck in the contest!
And may your pen continue to be blessed,
Melbelles
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Wow, the way you painted this in my mind was stunningly beautiful. Honestly, this kind of took my breath away. I will take this imagery into my dreams. Thank you for this beautiful piece! Good luck in the contest!
And may your pen continue to be blessed,
Melbelles
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review, you don't know how much it means to me. :)
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You?re very welcome! :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is well presented, Mystery Author.
I love the animated image and color scheme. Great
job with the syllable count per line.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Your contest entry is well presented, Mystery Author.
I love the animated image and color scheme. Great
job with the syllable count per line.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, it's so appreciated. :)
Comment from jessizero
This was a great tribute to nature, daffodils in particular. It did bring to mind a ballet. Thank you for sharing your poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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This was a great tribute to nature, daffodils in particular. It did bring to mind a ballet. Thank you for sharing your poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
It's a beautiful nature 3-5-3 poem. The syllable count is on point. The font is large and easily read. It's colorful, AND the flowers moves as if in the wind!! Kudos on a well-written and superbly presented poem. I voted for you!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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It's a beautiful nature 3-5-3 poem. The syllable count is on point. The font is large and easily read. It's colorful, AND the flowers moves as if in the wind!! Kudos on a well-written and superbly presented poem. I voted for you!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it really means the world to me. :)
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You are welcome. You deserve it. I will be voting for this poem when the booth opens.
