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Goodbye Mum

A harrowing experience. (757 words)

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Comment from Paul McFarland
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A heart wrenching story. You have done a great job in telling this tale. I was very affected by it. It brought back to memory the worst event in my life.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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Thank you for sharing this post. I enjoyed reading your story and message. Your birth mother should have refrained from asking you to call her mother. You had a great life with your adopted parents and the one's you loved. And they loved you dearly.

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

Comment from Fleedleflump
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The rawness and - above all else - shock of the experience comes across achingly clearly in your account. It's extremely well written, but I know that's not the priority. You manage to convey how drastically one night - out of the blue - can alter the lives of everyone around it. I love the conclusion you come to - the strength of your connection to you mum. I've never understood why some people dismiss adopted parents/children as somehow inferior. The person who loved, nurtured and raised you is your parent - it's as simple as that.

A very affecting read.

Mike

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022