Jack's Arrest
50 Word Flash contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from Michaela Moore
First 6 stars I have given so far! I voted for you and believe that this is a perfect 50 word flash fiction story. Not a word is out of place. And the surprise at the end truly caught me off guard and delighted my soul! Excellent job!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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First 6 stars I have given so far! I voted for you and believe that this is a perfect 50 word flash fiction story. Not a word is out of place. And the surprise at the end truly caught me off guard and delighted my soul! Excellent job!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Michaela. I always like to throw a surprise ending in my stories when I can. Lol.
Let me be one of the first to welcome you to the site. I've been on here for a few years and love all the contests. Plus, learned a few things along the way. If you ever have any questions about anything I'll do my best to help out. I'm sure you'll make a few friends on here.
I really appreciate your first sixer, Michaela. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again. Have yourself a great day.
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Ron
Comment from Heather Knight
I love this. It's so very original. I never saw what was coming. The last sentence made me laugh. I didn't expect your main character to be that Jack.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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I love this. It's so very original. I never saw what was coming. The last sentence made me laugh. I didn't expect your main character to be that Jack.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Heather. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from evilynne
That is an interesting update of an old tale. It's well written. I am actually giggling at the outcome. I think your full of beans, so good luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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That is an interesting update of an old tale. It's well written. I am actually giggling at the outcome. I think your full of beans, so good luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Evi. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhhh! You got me but good with this one!! EXCELLENT Flash Fiction "mislead" going on here, Mystery Writer. Like the planes in Jack's airspace, I never saw that coming!
This sure seems like a winning entry to me! Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Ohhhh! You got me but good with this one!! EXCELLENT Flash Fiction "mislead" going on here, Mystery Writer. Like the planes in Jack's airspace, I never saw that coming!
This sure seems like a winning entry to me! Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Rachelle. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my silly take on the contest. Have yourself a great day.
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My pleasure! It was a delightful entry...and last time I looked, it seemed as if I wasn't the only one who thought so!!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked this piece. It's always a nice treat when something so familiar as on old tale is mucked around with. Especially when done well and differently.
Got a nice laugh out of this.
Best of luck to you
GMG
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Hi there,
I liked this piece. It's always a nice treat when something so familiar as on old tale is mucked around with. Especially when done well and differently.
Got a nice laugh out of this.
Best of luck to you
GMG
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review and stars, GMG. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
Comment from Scott Rhodie
Nicely thought out, and well presented within the confines of the fifty words. The piece flows with a good beginning, middle and end. All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Nicely thought out, and well presented within the confines of the fifty words. The piece flows with a good beginning, middle and end. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Scott. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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Not a problem.