One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from evilynne
This is such a sad statement about children who are not found. The picture is heartbreaking. The author's notes are extremely helpful, both in regard to the subject matter and the poetic format employed. Evi
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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This is such a sad statement about children who are not found. The picture is heartbreaking. The author's notes are extremely helpful, both in regard to the subject matter and the poetic format employed. Evi
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It is horrible to think about this. It is also important to regularly update those posters. Why would God allow such things to happen? Even though we are not supposed to question God, I just don't understand how anyone could harm or abduct someone, especially children. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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It is horrible to think about this. It is also important to regularly update those posters. Why would God allow such things to happen? Even though we are not supposed to question God, I just don't understand how anyone could harm or abduct someone, especially children. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
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You are welcome.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a great example of a tragic event that so often ends badly. We should all be ashamed of living in such a world. You have penned it with skill and understanding. Much enjoyed, especially the satori. Kate xx PS in the notes I think you mean abducted.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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This is a great example of a tragic event that so often ends badly. We should all be ashamed of living in such a world. You have penned it with skill and understanding. Much enjoyed, especially the satori. Kate xx PS in the notes I think you mean abducted.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment from royowen
I think there's lots of cold cases where there are missing people that have never been found, in my home state there are at least five children that went missing several years ago, and still remains a mystery, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I think there's lots of cold cases where there are missing people that have never been found, in my home state there are at least five children that went missing several years ago, and still remains a mystery, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs & blessings
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid"-- Atticus
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Most welcome
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy,
such a visual impact and then to have the appropriate words to back it up in such a haunting way within this format... yes, you are the Queen of short form... hmmmm, and a true wordsmith within your craft.
Yes, these words just don't stop after the read. There is an echo that follows you and sits in the pit of one's stomach.
Powerful and hard-hitting presentation!
With our thoughts we create...
indelible memories.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Hi Gypsy,
such a visual impact and then to have the appropriate words to back it up in such a haunting way within this format... yes, you are the Queen of short form... hmmmm, and a true wordsmith within your craft.
Yes, these words just don't stop after the read. There is an echo that follows you and sits in the pit of one's stomach.
Powerful and hard-hitting presentation!
With our thoughts we create...
indelible memories.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, Excellent review, helpfull feedback, and kind words, James. I appreciate your understanding of this shameful and bleak fact in the USA.
Take care.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."-- Atticus
Comment from lyenochka
You always choose just the write words to paint an emotional picture! The "sun bleached poster" erases the child's face just like the child's existence fades out of the police memories as it becomes a "cold case." But the parents' grief never ends.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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You always choose just the write words to paint an emotional picture! The "sun bleached poster" erases the child's face just like the child's existence fades out of the police memories as it becomes a "cold case." But the parents' grief never ends.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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You always get my poems, thank you. I appreciate you.
Gypsy hugs & blessings
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid"-- Atticus
Comment from AP Apgar
Very interesting poem- good presentation- picture - poem has good flow - I was amazed at the number of cases reported by the FBI in 2021- cases about children especially get to me - thanks for being it to light- hug
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Very interesting poem- good presentation- picture - poem has good flow - I was amazed at the number of cases reported by the FBI in 2021- cases about children especially get to me - thanks for being it to light- hug
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs & blessings
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid"-- Atticus
Comment from karenina
So impactful! I see these "missing" posters now and then...torn, faded, half blowing in the wind...
Someone's child is gone... Someone's prayer has gone unanswered.
Breaks my heart
Karenina
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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So impactful! I see these "missing" posters now and then...torn, faded, half blowing in the wind...
Someone's child is gone... Someone's prayer has gone unanswered.
Breaks my heart
Karenina
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Karenina, you are right, it's so sad. Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs & blessings
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid"-- Atticus
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You've brought them back into our awareness, and that is powerful...
Comment from kahpot
So sad, So true, far too many of our children seem to have just fallen through the cracks, which leaves far too many predators still out there, very well written, an excellent (sad) haiku****kahpot
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So sad, So true, far too many of our children seem to have just fallen through the cracks, which leaves far too many predators still out there, very well written, an excellent (sad) haiku****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, kym, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review! Yes, it's very sad.
Gypsy
