Reaching for the Moon
An entry for the club challenge16 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
If this poem was listed around Easter time, then "He will rise above darkness."
Regardless your Kelly Lune has deep meaning in only a few words.
Mark
P.S. I have seen some Lune poems as left aligned - akin to a crescent moon.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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If this poem was listed around Easter time, then "He will rise above darkness."
Regardless your Kelly Lune has deep meaning in only a few words.
Mark
P.S. I have seen some Lune poems as left aligned - akin to a crescent moon.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you Mark, and yes I can see how this could be affective, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Kahpot!
How I appreciate the Lune poetic format, and yours is exceptionally-crafted.
Your message holds deep, resonating meaning for me...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Hello, Kahpot!
How I appreciate the Lune poetic format, and yours is exceptionally-crafted.
Your message holds deep, resonating meaning for me...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much, I enjoyed trying this short form, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Lee,
This poem reminds me of my life struggles and my reaching for the stars to rise above the ashes. (Boredom, mostly).
The word 'all' is a great choice.
Darkness to me is depression, it could mean something else to another.
You give hope in this short eloquent poem.
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Lee,
This poem reminds me of my life struggles and my reaching for the stars to rise above the ashes. (Boredom, mostly).
The word 'all' is a great choice.
Darkness to me is depression, it could mean something else to another.
You give hope in this short eloquent poem.
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you Cindy, yes if we can always aim higher it will give us motivation, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, very good, very cute. I especially liked:
I will rise
above the darkness
(Good word play)
Fantastic photo. Good sensory appeal. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Hello Kahpot, very good, very cute. I especially liked:
I will rise
above the darkness
(Good word play)
Fantastic photo. Good sensory appeal. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
This is a wonderful lune poem that makes the reader feel good. In few words, you offer encouragement. "Reaching for the moon" is a perfect opening line to draw the reader into your words. I am very fond of poetry about the moon, I never tire of reading beautiful verse about the moon. Excellent lune form.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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This is a wonderful lune poem that makes the reader feel good. In few words, you offer encouragement. "Reaching for the moon" is a perfect opening line to draw the reader into your words. I am very fond of poetry about the moon, I never tire of reading beautiful verse about the moon. Excellent lune form.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you, yes the moon is inspirational, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is one of your best poems ever, kahpot.
I love the image and the thought it inspired.
This would've made a great contest entry.
Thanks for sharing a well composed lune, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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This is one of your best poems ever, kahpot.
I love the image and the thought it inspired.
This would've made a great contest entry.
Thanks for sharing a well composed lune, Jan
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Jan, for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written lune with a good topic
and effective nature imagery.
-The middle line is strong and
adds to the theme of the poem,
and is part of a positive message
about rising out of the darkness.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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-Very nice image and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written lune with a good topic
and effective nature imagery.
-The middle line is strong and
adds to the theme of the poem,
and is part of a positive message
about rising out of the darkness.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your excellent and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, kahpot.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This gives you an ascending feeling of a fantastic autumn night. Your words are meaningful and telling of you raising above whatever darkness comes your way--wonderfully done! Best JohnC.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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This gives you an ascending feeling of a fantastic autumn night. Your words are meaningful and telling of you raising above whatever darkness comes your way--wonderfully done! Best JohnC.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from harmony13
This is a lovely poem! I find these words hopeful, filled with meaning,
uplifting, descriptive and creative. I found these words motivating and
positive as many are going through difficult times. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words. Have a great day!...Maria
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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This is a lovely poem! I find these words hopeful, filled with meaning,
uplifting, descriptive and creative. I found these words motivating and
positive as many are going through difficult times. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words. Have a great day!...Maria
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Japanese poetry club. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Beautiful presentation... I love the black background.
Gypsy hugs & blessings
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid"-- Atticus
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the Japanese poetry club. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Beautiful presentation... I love the black background.
Gypsy hugs & blessings
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid"-- Atticus
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much, as always so very encouraging****kahpot
