Stand
Lesson in Life.7 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It is said that if you fall, you should get back up. Restart from scratch. It is never too late to believe in yourself. Taking things slowly is better than trying to rush them. It is better to take your time to complete tasks. Your sharing of this great awareness is greatly appreciated.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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It is said that if you fall, you should get back up. Restart from scratch. It is never too late to believe in yourself. Taking things slowly is better than trying to rush them. It is better to take your time to complete tasks. Your sharing of this great awareness is greatly appreciated.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Stand"
Stand is a 8 Words or less Contest Entry rich on Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck Mia with this one
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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"Stand"
Stand is a 8 Words or less Contest Entry rich on Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck Mia with this one
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
There is a very powerful message in this poem. Songs have been written and sung about. Too bad people don't believe in themselves, each other, life & possibilities.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l5DZUONKou0
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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There is a very powerful message in this poem. Songs have been written and sung about. Too bad people don't believe in themselves, each other, life & possibilities.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l5DZUONKou0
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I have not heard that song in so long. I love it.
Comment from jessizero
I liked the way you formatted the color of the words and the capitalization of the word "WIN" to emphasize your point. Thank you for sharing your work, and best wishes to you.
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I liked the way you formatted the color of the words and the capitalization of the word "WIN" to emphasize your point. Thank you for sharing your work, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you. I felt the colors and capitalization would do just that.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Nice picture... very colorful... presents courage bro win.
This is a good piece of advice. Always get help when in need.
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful advice
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Nice picture... very colorful... presents courage bro win.
This is a good piece of advice. Always get help when in need.
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful advice
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you
Comment from mermaids
Words of wisdom here, get back up and try again. Excellent eight word poem that makes the reader think and gives forth a positive message. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Words of wisdom here, get back up and try again. Excellent eight word poem that makes the reader think and gives forth a positive message. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Fleedleflump
I like the direct approach you've taken to this. Taking a loss and turning it into a win by showing how the semester of tips is all you need - nobody would ever win anything if they stayed down every time they fell.
Mike
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I like the direct approach you've taken to this. Taking a loss and turning it into a win by showing how the semester of tips is all you need - nobody would ever win anything if they stayed down every time they fell.
Mike
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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That is true. Thank you for taking the time to review.