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What a Guy

There are people in this world with big hearts.

16 total reviews 
Comment from Ric Myworld
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In a world that seems to be going in the wrong direction so much of the time, it wonderful to hear one of the happy stories that restores our faith in people . . . well, a person. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Gloria ....
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What a most heartwarming story for Christmas. It is encouraging when compassionate people make such a giving gesture.

This was a pleasure to read and review today.

Gloria

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
    This was a miracle. Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Raul1
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You have executed well your story and the sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from Michaela Moore
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Simple, to the point, and poignant. Nice job creating a flash fiction of only 50 words for such an important memory. Every word carefully detailed the beauty of this act of kindness that brought such joy. Cheers!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What an inspirational story, Carolyn. I loved reading it.
Yes, there are good people everywhere. Too bad we don't
hear more about them. So, this is a great contest entry
and special story.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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Wow! What a sweet short, short story. It had a happy but foreshadowed ending. It was good. However, the font size could be a tad larger. The visual fits well. I'm glad you encountered a good person in your time of need.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Thank you.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 13-Jul-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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What a guy? I have not met someone who is as nice as the store manager.

This can only happen in fiction. It will not happen in real life.

A very nice story for the contest

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    It is non-fiction. It did happen. Thank you for the great review.
reply by Goodadvicechan on 13-Jul-2022
    Wow? the world still have ?love.?
Comment from Heather Knight
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What a beautiful story! I love the fact that it's real. It's so nice to know there are kind people in the world.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Thank you much. It was a miracle.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This fifty-word flash fiction story, What a Guy, has the required word count and notes a special moment when a kind soul did a good deed. Nice.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Yes. Thank you.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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We all need to read stories like this every day. Life would be such a happier place if we did. What a lovely, heart-warming tale you have shared here...and in only fifty words! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Thank you.