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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Concentrated emotion and deep sadness with a lovely flow so touching Ricky my heart goes out to you your son is an angel now well done God bless you my friend
xxlove meia

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
    It's time progresses and I move over forward in my writings occasionally I give credit to my son.
    I have truly been gifted with an ability to bring forward many beautiful words from above.
    Always appreciative to see you my dear!
    Have a blessed rest of your week!
    Ricky
Comment from Fleedleflump
Excellent
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The dice doth roll stanza is so sad, but also so reflective of life and its vagaries. You bring it home emotionally at the end, with thoughts of birthday parties never to be. It's heart breaking, and yet inspiring to read you speaking about it and sharing your thoughts so others might heal.

Mike

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Thanks Mikr.
    Journaling helps but the Scar still runs deep.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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I always feel for you when I read your work, and this is no exception. I feel for you. You have a real gift for expressing your emotions. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Thanks and Journaling helps but the scar runs deep.
    Doctor Ricky1024