Teaching is Valuable
Contest Entry10 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Raul, I really like your story about learning from good teachers I have learned a lot from fanstory too.
Your writing is clear and concise.
Good luck in the contest, Raul.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Raul, I really like your story about learning from good teachers I have learned a lot from fanstory too.
Your writing is clear and concise.
Good luck in the contest, Raul.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
It was interesting to read how you learnt writing, and the accessory subjects that were broached. Thanks for sharing all this in the forum of this contest, and good luck with the voters. Kate xx
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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It was interesting to read how you learnt writing, and the accessory subjects that were broached. Thanks for sharing all this in the forum of this contest, and good luck with the voters. Kate xx
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
On line and correspondence courses are both a great way to learn something new. Good for you for doing so.
A few observations:
Para 1, 6th sentence (consist of) should be (consists of)
Para 1, 8th sentence: (sseriously) should be (seriously)
Para 1, 9th sentence: (three act) should be (three-act) Hyphen
Para 2, 2nd sentence (Novels) should be (novels) capitalization
Para 3, 1st sentence: CONSIDER removing (why)
Para 4, 3rd sentence: Remove comma after (But)
Para 5, 6th sentence: (productive.) should be (productive?) Punctuation
Para 6, 3rd sentence: (teachings) should be (teaching) or (has) = (have)
Para 6, 4th sentence: CONSIDER removing (like)
It sounds like you've had good teachers throughout your quest for learning. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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On line and correspondence courses are both a great way to learn something new. Good for you for doing so.
A few observations:
Para 1, 6th sentence (consist of) should be (consists of)
Para 1, 8th sentence: (sseriously) should be (seriously)
Para 1, 9th sentence: (three act) should be (three-act) Hyphen
Para 2, 2nd sentence (Novels) should be (novels) capitalization
Para 3, 1st sentence: CONSIDER removing (why)
Para 4, 3rd sentence: Remove comma after (But)
Para 5, 6th sentence: (productive.) should be (productive?) Punctuation
Para 6, 3rd sentence: (teachings) should be (teaching) or (has) = (have)
Para 6, 4th sentence: CONSIDER removing (like)
It sounds like you've had good teachers throughout your quest for learning. Keep it up.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you! I have fixed the mistakes. Thank you for your help! I will keep it up.
Comment from Bill Schott
It sounds like you have taken a lot of positive and important steps, Raul, to improve your chances to be published one day. The most positive is your faith, which will always be with you.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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It sounds like you have taken a lot of positive and important steps, Raul, to improve your chances to be published one day. The most positive is your faith, which will always be with you.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
Good for you, Raul! You keep studying, reading, learning, and improving. Thanks for sharing how you are improving your writing, and for the good teaching you receive from the Lord in His Word, and also from your wonderful parents! Best wishes in the contest!
Comments:
The business consist on hardworking writers to take their novels sseriously. (The business consists of hardworking writers taking their novels seriously.)
I have learned to [first] write the middle of the story, second, the ending, and lastly, the beginning of a story.
When it is time I proofread with [a] fresh set of eyes
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Good for you, Raul! You keep studying, reading, learning, and improving. Thanks for sharing how you are improving your writing, and for the good teaching you receive from the Lord in His Word, and also from your wonderful parents! Best wishes in the contest!
Comments:
The business consist on hardworking writers to take their novels sseriously. (The business consists of hardworking writers taking their novels seriously.)
I have learned to [first] write the middle of the story, second, the ending, and lastly, the beginning of a story.
When it is time I proofread with [a] fresh set of eyes
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you and for your help! I have fixed the mistakes. It flows better now.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I applaud your approach to things - you know what you want to achieve, and you take the steps needed to get you there. Ther best advice I can give any aspiring writers is to read lots - read everything, especially the things that interest you. Before you know it, your writing will improve naturally.
This was a well written article :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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I applaud your approach to things - you know what you want to achieve, and you take the steps needed to get you there. Ther best advice I can give any aspiring writers is to read lots - read everything, especially the things that interest you. Before you know it, your writing will improve naturally.
This was a well written article :-)
Mike
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you! I'm glad you think so.
Comment from Ramona Agin
This is a great narrative about both teaching and learning. I have also learned a great deal about your journey as a writer. How exciting! You have traveled far. No wonder you are so good. I enjoy reading your work!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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This is a great narrative about both teaching and learning. I have also learned a great deal about your journey as a writer. How exciting! You have traveled far. No wonder you are so good. I enjoy reading your work!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you and for your compliment! This review means a lot to me. Thanks again!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, my friend, as along as we are still able to learn, tomorrow is but yet another blessing. We'll be better and smarter before the week ends. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Well, my friend, as along as we are still able to learn, tomorrow is but yet another blessing. We'll be better and smarter before the week ends. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from nomi338
As none of us here on Earth are perfect, to my mind, the worst kind of person is one who knows he needs to be taught, but will not even try to be better, will not even try to learn. There is little hope for that type of person. Thankfully you are not that type of person. So, thank God for that.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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As none of us here on Earth are perfect, to my mind, the worst kind of person is one who knows he needs to be taught, but will not even try to be better, will not even try to learn. There is little hope for that type of person. Thankfully you are not that type of person. So, thank God for that.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you! I know I am not that person, thank you for telling me, my friend!
Comment from RodG
It seems you have learned much from your online writing instructors, the Bible, and your parents. Hopefully what you learned about story writing will help you win fans on FanStory. Please go back and proofread this essay before voting starts. Some words like TAUGHT are misspelled.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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It seems you have learned much from your online writing instructors, the Bible, and your parents. Hopefully what you learned about story writing will help you win fans on FanStory. Please go back and proofread this essay before voting starts. Some words like TAUGHT are misspelled.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you and for your help! I have fixed the mistakes. Is it better now for a five stars rating? Please check.
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Raul, your spelling is better. Now let?s work on CLARITY. What is this ?literature business? you learned and what are those ?assets of writing? you speak of. I am a former English teacher and a willing to offer help.
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Okay, I fixed it. I hope that this makes sense. Is it better now?
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I?m sorry, but I still don?t know what exactly YOU have learned about literature or writing. Did you learn to analyze literature and look for meaning? If so, what SKILLS did you hone? And are you writing a novel? What have you learned about plotting, building character? I think answering my questions will take too much space.
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Okay! Is it better now for a five stars rating? Please check.
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Keep working on paragraphs 2 & 3. In 2 you talk about the writing assets you learned and suddenly start giving us your backstory. In 3 you seem to repeat what you said earlier.
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Is this any better? Please help.
