Together Yes!
A boy and a young man team up.14 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Rod,
A most inspirational poem you penned. Pleased you placed in the contest. The soldier deserved his Medal of Honor, the Purple Heart. The boy has gained a friend, likely for life, in place of the loss of his father's companionship.
Mark
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Rod,
A most inspirational poem you penned. Pleased you placed in the contest. The soldier deserved his Medal of Honor, the Purple Heart. The boy has gained a friend, likely for life, in place of the loss of his father's companionship.
Mark
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Oh, Mark, how you brightened my morning with those six bright stars and your stellar review of my story. Thank you so much! Rod
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred word story, Together Yes!, uses the correct word count and finds the new beginning to life's journey in the combining of survival and possibilities that friendship provides. Neat.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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This one-hundred word story, Together Yes!, uses the correct word count and finds the new beginning to life's journey in the combining of survival and possibilities that friendship provides. Neat.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Hi, Bill. This one was fun to write. I am glad you enjoyed it. Rod
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, that was lovely! What a wonderful story, there are many people who have lost limbs today, and all it takes is one person to take an interest and that persons life will be changed forever. This is a well deserved win. Congratulations! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Aww, that was lovely! What a wonderful story, there are many people who have lost limbs today, and all it takes is one person to take an interest and that persons life will be changed forever. This is a well deserved win. Congratulations! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for your enthusiastic response to my shortie. Yes, I foresee a friendship that will enhance both lives. Rod
Comment from Scott Rhodie
Nice story, and sets out the flash clearly. There is no twist as such at the end, but it allows you to think on about how they are likely to become friends in life. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Nice story, and sets out the flash clearly. There is no twist as such at the end, but it allows you to think on about how they are likely to become friends in life. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Scott, for your praise. Yes, I think these two will become good friends. Rod
Comment from lyenochka
That's a heartwarming story told in just a hundred words! Without all the details, you gave the backstory via the common loss of leg and dialogue and developed a relationship between the Marine and the boy. Hope this does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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That's a heartwarming story told in just a hundred words! Without all the details, you gave the backstory via the common loss of leg and dialogue and developed a relationship between the Marine and the boy. Hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, lyenochka, for your high praise of my story and its characters.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
A hundred words seemed not enough to relate this touching story and yet you did. If it was real, thanks for your service; if not thanks for writing such a heart-touching piece.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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A hundred words seemed not enough to relate this touching story and yet you did. If it was real, thanks for your service; if not thanks for writing such a heart-touching piece.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Tom, I appreciate your very kind praise of my story. It?s fiction.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry was well written, Mystery Author.
The dialogue was believable, the image is perfect, and
your words read smoothly. Your message was inspiring,
too.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Your contest entry was well written, Mystery Author.
The dialogue was believable, the image is perfect, and
your words read smoothly. Your message was inspiring,
too.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you kindly, Jan, for this terrific review.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, well done. The power of a good attitude, friendship and teamwork is amazing, together people can achieve so very much. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Hello author, well done. The power of a good attitude, friendship and teamwork is amazing, together people can achieve so very much. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you, LateBloomer, for your praise of my story and comments.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Hello author
This is a good story. The opening is good. It attracts you to follow to the end.
A sad story to lose a leg!
Yet It is admirable to see Kurt being g positive and carry on a meaningful life.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Hello author
This is a good story. The opening is good. It attracts you to follow to the end.
A sad story to lose a leg!
Yet It is admirable to see Kurt being g positive and carry on a meaningful life.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your positive review of my shortie.
Comment from Wendy G
A different and interesting flash fiction, although it rings with authenticity and being non-fiction. Your story is well- written, and I hope it does well in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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A different and interesting flash fiction, although it rings with authenticity and being non-fiction. Your story is well- written, and I hope it does well in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Wendy, for your praise of my story. I am pleased "it rings with authenticity." It is indeed fiction.
