I See You
What Colour Is Hazel4 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
What a lovely response to the prompt short and colourful. Our senses are wonderful and seeing is an amazing gateway to the external world.
I like how your poem has illustrated the the colour does indeed change.
Wishing you great luck with the voters.
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
What a lovely response to the prompt short and colourful. Our senses are wonderful and seeing is an amazing gateway to the external world.
I like how your poem has illustrated the the colour does indeed change.
Wishing you great luck with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you Gloria for your encouraging comments and review. Very much appreciated. All the best to you.
Comment from Aria Moore
I love this poem! It makes me see I need to be more grateful for my vision and my ability to appreciate the beauty and life around me. My eyes also tend to change colors though mine are more often a green and blue mix. Its interesting to hear people comment on my eyes as it does indeed differ on what I'm wearing or even if there is heavy sunlight. I'm sure your eyes are lovely! Thank you for your poem!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
I love this poem! It makes me see I need to be more grateful for my vision and my ability to appreciate the beauty and life around me. My eyes also tend to change colors though mine are more often a green and blue mix. Its interesting to hear people comment on my eyes as it does indeed differ on what I'm wearing or even if there is heavy sunlight. I'm sure your eyes are lovely! Thank you for your poem!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you Aria for your comments and your rating. Both are very much appreciated. All the best to you as well.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A lovely note below the poem explains why you cherish the fact that you can see more than the actual color of your eyes. This poem is filled with gratitude. Good work.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
A lovely note below the poem explains why you cherish the fact that you can see more than the actual color of your eyes. This poem is filled with gratitude. Good work.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much for your excellent review and rating.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I can't imagine what it would be like to lose my vision. I'm a reader and like to write some on this site. It must be awful for your mother and she has my deepest sympathy. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
I can't imagine what it would be like to lose my vision. I'm a reader and like to write some on this site. It must be awful for your mother and she has my deepest sympathy. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your review and generous rating. Your sympathy is genuinely appreciate. All the best to you.