Chasing Gnomes
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Chasing Gnomes Ch.9 - Chestnuts"Dragon Dance Chronicles Book 1
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Comment from royowen
Gee, it looks like they're in trouble, except they have the weapon of opinion on their side, the companions that is. They ate a motley bunch of misfits, but isn't that the way one wins? The way of bluff and difference. Beautifully written Mike, good description of action, and, combined with being in the their minds, is good writing, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Gee, it looks like they're in trouble, except they have the weapon of opinion on their side, the companions that is. They ate a motley bunch of misfits, but isn't that the way one wins? The way of bluff and difference. Beautifully written Mike, good description of action, and, combined with being in the their minds, is good writing, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Tha k you, Roy :-). I had to cut the scene here, at a pause in combat, as the scene was touching 4000 words otherwise. So glad you enjoyed it!
Mike
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I think you ended at a compelling, good timing
