Witness
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "An Act of Mercy"Modern struggle in another world.
4 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a wonderful chapter. Full of action, tension and most of all compassion. I'm glad you let their enemy live. Will this cause problems later? You did a great job. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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What a wonderful chapter. Full of action, tension and most of all compassion. I'm glad you let their enemy live. Will this cause problems later? You did a great job. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad the compassion shone through as meant to. I really appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from royowen
I tend to write favour poems about the foes that our soldiers face. Our boys are built up anyway. It's not the fault of the enemy soldiers we face, they are not all in humanly fanatical, Just young men or women, forced to fight. The battlefield is a brutal place, they have mums, dads, and siblings and others who love them too. I loved your story, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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I tend to write favour poems about the foes that our soldiers face. Our boys are built up anyway. It's not the fault of the enemy soldiers we face, they are not all in humanly fanatical, Just young men or women, forced to fight. The battlefield is a brutal place, they have mums, dads, and siblings and others who love them too. I loved your story, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad it came out well. I agree with you very much: people are humans first, and when they fight, they're still very human, no matter the banner they're under. I really appreciate your time. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Most welcome
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is extremely well-written and I found that I enjoyed reading the story. War stories are not my favorite so that's saying a lot for me. The dialogue is marvelous and carries the story forward in a excellent manner. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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This is extremely well-written and I found that I enjoyed reading the story. War stories are not my favorite so that's saying a lot for me. The dialogue is marvelous and carries the story forward in a excellent manner. Nicely done.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, particularly since war stories aren't your thing. I appreciate you taking the time. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent writing. Well done.
You give your characters raw emotions. Good work.
The dialogue seems genuine. And scene descriptions real.
I hope they get some real food soon.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Excellent writing. Well done.
You give your characters raw emotions. Good work.
The dialogue seems genuine. And scene descriptions real.
I hope they get some real food soon.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate the time and I'm glad the emotions came across. Have a wonderful day.
