Magic Forest
short and colourful poem contest8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Short and Colorful prompt contest. I love the little frog...so cute.
Good poem color form, connection between lines, presentation, and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the Short and Colorful prompt contest. I love the little frog...so cute.
Good poem color form, connection between lines, presentation, and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Lucky frog. Maybe a princess will kiss him, and all of his dreams will come true. Sounds like a great beginning to a children's story book.
Great job
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Lucky frog. Maybe a princess will kiss him, and all of his dreams will come true. Sounds like a great beginning to a children's story book.
Great job
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A frog is just as entitled as any creature to think of himself as a king with a crown on its head, you made me smile here and this is a fantastical and magical story., much enjoyed, you entertained me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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A frog is just as entitled as any creature to think of himself as a king with a crown on its head, you made me smile here and this is a fantastical and magical story., much enjoyed, you entertained me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
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Comment from John Ciarmello
This is super cute. You've used all the prompts wisely, and the writing is well done. I wish you much success with the contest. Thank you for sharing. This is a fun read. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This is super cute. You've used all the prompts wisely, and the writing is well done. I wish you much success with the contest. Thank you for sharing. This is a fun read. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
Vivid, lively, and fun to read because of the intriguing surprise he experiences upon seeing his reflection! What a cute idea, and, if I take it further, a nice allegory, as well: do we realize how we actually appear? Does it change because of our having ventured forth from our natural environment?
Since poetry is supposed to give us pause and make us think, you have obviously done a very fine job here!! Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Vivid, lively, and fun to read because of the intriguing surprise he experiences upon seeing his reflection! What a cute idea, and, if I take it further, a nice allegory, as well: do we realize how we actually appear? Does it change because of our having ventured forth from our natural environment?
Since poetry is supposed to give us pause and make us think, you have obviously done a very fine job here!! Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
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Comment from prettybluebirds
This is cute and well-written. You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. The picture is neat and perfect for the subject of your poem. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This is cute and well-written. You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. The picture is neat and perfect for the subject of your poem. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. Nicely done.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Comment from Theodore McDowell
Nice response to the writing prompt about color. I loved the speculation in the last three lines: A smile came upon his face,
this little frog leapt for joy,
a promise, a dream, a wish, maybe!
Good job.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Nice response to the writing prompt about color. I loved the speculation in the last three lines: A smile came upon his face,
this little frog leapt for joy,
a promise, a dream, a wish, maybe!
Good job.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is so cute, and I know many children will love it as us adults. I like the colors. They are so alive. And it would be interesting to know how the frog would feel to see itself reflection from looking at the water. Thank you for posting, it brought a warm smile to my face.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This is so cute, and I know many children will love it as us adults. I like the colors. They are so alive. And it would be interesting to know how the frog would feel to see itself reflection from looking at the water. Thank you for posting, it brought a warm smile to my face.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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