One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- and your new style - you are very creative! - also good presentation- picture of the child- heart felt - a very sensitive time that requires professional guidance- if possible- for both adults and children processing death at the same time- touches my heart- hug
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I like your poem- and your new style - you are very creative! - also good presentation- picture of the child- heart felt - a very sensitive time that requires professional guidance- if possible- for both adults and children processing death at the same time- touches my heart- hug
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs & blessings
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid"-- Atticus
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Sad and heartbreaking.
It hits close to home for me.
Your words and presentation capture the pain of loss for a young child.
Best wishes always
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Sad and heartbreaking.
It hits close to home for me.
Your words and presentation capture the pain of loss for a young child.
Best wishes always
Mary
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
Amazing! You took the time to create a new form, the 12/5 Poem, Gypsy, the picture of the young girl on the bed with the pillow. I am truly amazed with this new form, yet so sad for the anguish behind the poem. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Amazing! You took the time to create a new form, the 12/5 Poem, Gypsy, the picture of the young girl on the bed with the pillow. I am truly amazed with this new form, yet so sad for the anguish behind the poem. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Aryr
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be. Hugs too :)
Gypsy
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Humza Khan
Aw that's really sad but very touching. The image really goes with the poem too and together they do express a Grief.
Well done and thanks for explaining the format and rules of the poem because it wasn't one I was familiar with before
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Aw that's really sad but very touching. The image really goes with the poem too and together they do express a Grief.
Well done and thanks for explaining the format and rules of the poem because it wasn't one I was familiar with before
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
This poem reminds me of you and how hard it was for you to recover from losing your beautiful mom at such a young age. The only escape seems to be sleep and the scent of mom is still on the pillow. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This poem reminds me of you and how hard it was for you to recover from losing your beautiful mom at such a young age. The only escape seems to be sleep and the scent of mom is still on the pillow. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Helen. It's a grief that never goes away.
Hugs & kisses
MariVal