My New Sorceress Neighbor
5-7-5 Poetry contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a funny 5-7-5 poem. The syllable count is on point. I like the font centered on the two visuals. However, it would be more prominent if it was larger, colorful and brought down to the middle of the two visuals. The two vibrant visuals make this poem stand out. Please tell me after the contest how to do this. The large accurately made turd is too funny! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This is a funny 5-7-5 poem. The syllable count is on point. I like the font centered on the two visuals. However, it would be more prominent if it was larger, colorful and brought down to the middle of the two visuals. The two vibrant visuals make this poem stand out. Please tell me after the contest how to do this. The large accurately made turd is too funny! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I played around with these pictures in my art program to get them to look like this. I just added the fence and shrubs to the dragon imagine and the poo to the house one. I have both images saved in my computer. The dragon one is just imported but the house pic had to be put on an online image sharing site then copy and pasted to be added to the piece. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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You are welcome! That's more technology than I know. I will have one visual.
Comment from Scott Rhodie
That's good and very funny, but I'd like to see you try and stop her or her dragon. Better you than me. It's a good entry for the contest, and you should do well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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That's good and very funny, but I'd like to see you try and stop her or her dragon. Better you than me. It's a good entry for the contest, and you should do well. Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Scott. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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Not a problem.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
well, all the syllables are present and correct which is always nice.
In terms of the competition, I think this one might struggle a bit. Other than the required syllable count, there aren't too many poetic devices at play.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Hi there,
well, all the syllables are present and correct which is always nice.
In terms of the competition, I think this one might struggle a bit. Other than the required syllable count, there aren't too many poetic devices at play.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Yeah, not many take the time or effort to add much poetic value to their 5/7/5's. I just love throwing my money away. Lol. Thanks for the review, GMG.
