Done For Others
Self improvement through sharing and caring.11 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your rhyming acrostic sharing a word of wisdom about self-improvement. We are certainly blessed when we help others, befriend, or "Restore some hope to a troubled soul." Congrats on the win!!
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Great job with your rhyming acrostic sharing a word of wisdom about self-improvement. We are certainly blessed when we help others, befriend, or "Restore some hope to a troubled soul." Congrats on the win!!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
A person can leave home sad or miserable. You go throughout the grocery store and pick up the items you need. Once you get to the checkout lane and someone greets you with a smile, your mood changes. However, if they do not acknowledge you or tell you to have a great day, you go back home feeling the same. I enjoyed reading this post. People need to realize we are all in the same boat. Thank you.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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A person can leave home sad or miserable. You go throughout the grocery store and pick up the items you need. Once you get to the checkout lane and someone greets you with a smile, your mood changes. However, if they do not acknowledge you or tell you to have a great day, you go back home feeling the same. I enjoyed reading this post. People need to realize we are all in the same boat. Thank you.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your review. It is always nice when someone greets us with a smile - actually notices us and has a comment.
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You are welcome. And it is hard to find anyone smiling or speaking in this area. However, it makes me feel great.
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, DONE FOR OTHERS, follows the vertical, first-letter formatting and reminds the readers that workng with others as a partner or mentor can make lasting relationships.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This acrostic poem, DONE FOR OTHERS, follows the vertical, first-letter formatting and reminds the readers that workng with others as a partner or mentor can make lasting relationships.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reviewing - appreciated.
Comment from Wendy G
This is an acrostic which flows smoothly, remains on topic and seems unforced. Composing one which rhymes adds a level of difficulty. Yours is meaningful with a positive message focusing on care for others. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This is an acrostic which flows smoothly, remains on topic and seems unforced. Composing one which rhymes adds a level of difficulty. Yours is meaningful with a positive message focusing on care for others. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reviewing - I appreciate your comments and good wishes.
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Congratulations on an excellent win. You had my vote.
Wendy
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Thanks for your support Wendy!
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It was deserved. Your poem was definitely the best.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are uplifting, encouraging, helpful, descriptive and creative. I pondered on the words of this poem and found them to be so helpful for when you need to promote self worth. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is colorful and positive and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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The author's words are uplifting, encouraging, helpful, descriptive and creative. I pondered on the words of this poem and found them to be so helpful for when you need to promote self worth. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is colorful and positive and compliments these words.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your positive response to my poem. I am grateful.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a positive and motivating poem. The rhyme scheme is on point. I like the size of the font and that the beginning letters are a different color and prominent. I like that the word wonder is in italics and made to stand out. The visual fits well and is vibrant. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This is a positive and motivating poem. The rhyme scheme is on point. I like the size of the font and that the beginning letters are a different color and prominent. I like that the word wonder is in italics and made to stand out. The visual fits well and is vibrant. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your positive response to my poem. I am grateful.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Troubles can sometimes weigh us down and a positive attitude will always help us to pick ourselves up and strive forward, I enjoyed the sentiments in your acrostic, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Troubles can sometimes weigh us down and a positive attitude will always help us to pick ourselves up and strive forward, I enjoyed the sentiments in your acrostic, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thank you. Sunny side up.
Comment from Fleedleflump
What a lovely message of positivity and spreading the hope around :-). It can be easy to lose yourself in a dark spiral of your own thoughts and feelings, and forget that the way out can be as simple as talking to someone or smiling as a passing stranger (not in a creepy way, though - that'll get you a reputation).
I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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What a lovely message of positivity and spreading the hope around :-). It can be easy to lose yourself in a dark spiral of your own thoughts and feelings, and forget that the way out can be as simple as talking to someone or smiling as a passing stranger (not in a creepy way, though - that'll get you a reputation).
I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your positive response to my poem. I am grateful.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the An Acrostic Poem About Self-Improvement writing prompt contest.
You followed the rules well and made it rhyme too...that's amazing.
I love the presentation. You have a good chance of winning. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the An Acrostic Poem About Self-Improvement writing prompt contest.
You followed the rules well and made it rhyme too...that's amazing.
I love the presentation. You have a good chance of winning. Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Your comment came true - this did win!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written acrostic poem you have penned about self improvement for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive and helpful words. Best wishes in the contest. teri
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This is a very well written acrostic poem you have penned about self improvement for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive and helpful words. Best wishes in the contest. teri
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your positive response to my poem. I am grateful.
