A Joyful Blessing
Cesare's magical smile5 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. The syllable count is on point. I like the font centered on the visual. However, it would be more prominent if it was larger and colorful. Baby things are typically vibrant. The visual is absolutely adorable. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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This is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. The syllable count is on point. I like the font centered on the visual. However, it would be more prominent if it was larger and colorful. Baby things are typically vibrant. The visual is absolutely adorable. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Sandra,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I had some success with poems posted these past two weeks. I received four 3rd place finishes in recent contest entered.
The book is slow going but will be completed by the end of the month. I changed the title to "Forever Memories."
Eugene
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You are welcome. I was wondering last night how it was coming along. I started to email you, but I know how worrisome it can be when folks keep asking about the status. If you have any questions, you may email me. I check my email daily. Good Luck!
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Eugene, congratulations on your success on this site. Obviously, you rock!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice photo and adorable little boy.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery shows many wonderful
qualities of a young child, like the first smile.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Very nice photo and adorable little boy.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery shows many wonderful
qualities of a young child, like the first smile.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest.
What a beautiful baby :)
Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
Good luck k in the contest.
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest.
What a beautiful baby :)
Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
Good luck k in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Those eyes sparkle with a smile. This baby is so cute. I enjoyed reading and looking at this precious baby. The child looks so happy. Thank you for sharing this great poem and picture. Have a great evening.
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Those eyes sparkle with a smile. This baby is so cute. I enjoyed reading and looking at this precious baby. The child looks so happy. Thank you for sharing this great poem and picture. Have a great evening.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
Comment from LisaMay
What a cutie! You have described your darling son with such love and tenderness... the smile, the cheeks (although I am doubtful that cheeks can twinkle), and those huge awe-inspiring eyes.
You have misspelled his name in the top line:
Ceasre's magical smile
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What a cutie! You have described your darling son with such love and tenderness... the smile, the cheeks (although I am doubtful that cheeks can twinkle), and those huge awe-inspiring eyes.
You have misspelled his name in the top line:
Ceasre's magical smile
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
