On Becoming More Aware
Meditation helps one become more aware of self.2 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
There's a subtle rhythm to this - nothing as obvious as a regular meter, more like a conversational medley of pulses. It tells me you're listening to the movement of each line, allowing the thoughts to find their own pattern, and that makes for innately calming reading. I'll say it - your poem on meditation is indeed like meditation.
I wish I had a six.
Mike
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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There's a subtle rhythm to this - nothing as obvious as a regular meter, more like a conversational medley of pulses. It tells me you're listening to the movement of each line, allowing the thoughts to find their own pattern, and that makes for innately calming reading. I'll say it - your poem on meditation is indeed like meditation.
I wish I had a six.
Mike
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the insightful review. Your words alone are worth a six to me.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting poem with a lot of truth to it. Meditations does give us greater peace and better understanding of our own selves. Best of luck in the acrostic poetry contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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This is an interesting poem with a lot of truth to it. Meditations does give us greater peace and better understanding of our own selves. Best of luck in the acrostic poetry contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the read and the feedback. Peace to you.
