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Jesus Took The Fall

Stand tall

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is a wonderful poem showing the way it was for Jesus and is for us. He had paid our price, so we should live for Him. Best wishes for the 5-7-5 poetry contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
    Thanks!
Comment from John Ciarmello
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This is a great piece, but it seems unfinished. Shouldn't the last line read "Be proud and stand tall" I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
    I finished it, no rhymes.