My Figment Friend
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet and cute story you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words. A great job you have done. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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This is a very sweet and cute story you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words. A great job you have done. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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thank you,Teri! very much appreciated.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a sweet story. Who knew a ghost could a comfy presence? This ghost might be a good story to write for children to change the whole aspect of ghosts. I remember Casper the friendly ghost was friendly stories.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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This is a sweet story. Who knew a ghost could a comfy presence? This ghost might be a good story to write for children to change the whole aspect of ghosts. I remember Casper the friendly ghost was friendly stories.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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good idea, Carol. Will you write it or shall I?
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You get to do it. Don't like ghosts.
Comment from Susan Newell
I love your story. No terror, just curiosity threatening sleepiness. What a lovely little spirit you have created. Great job for the contest. Edits follow.
Sue
I lept up. "Who said that?" -- delete end " so we know you are continuing to speak in the next line
I said, "something's in my bed." ==> "Something's
You okay?" yawn. ==> okay?" Yawn.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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I love your story. No terror, just curiosity threatening sleepiness. What a lovely little spirit you have created. Great job for the contest. Edits follow.
Sue
I lept up. "Who said that?" -- delete end " so we know you are continuing to speak in the next line
I said, "something's in my bed." ==> "Something's
You okay?" yawn. ==> okay?" Yawn.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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think I got 'em all. thanks, Susan.
Yeah, I may follow up with more on li'l Jasper
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You are always welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I don't think I would like to encounter this in my bed as it would scare me and until the bed was stripped I would never get back in it! Ha ha ha, I loved your inventive story, much fun, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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I don't think I would like to encounter this in my bed as it would scare me and until the bed was stripped I would never get back in it! Ha ha ha, I loved your inventive story, much fun, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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my imagination is braver than my real self!
thanks for reading, Dolly and for your comments!
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is brilliant because it flips things on its head - a supernatural encounter that's pleasant and positive, even though the circumstances sound creepy at first. You wrote it brilliantly.
Mike
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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This is brilliant because it flips things on its head - a supernatural encounter that's pleasant and positive, even though the circumstances sound creepy at first. You wrote it brilliantly.
Mike
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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wow. thanks, Mike!
May try to develop the little fellow - not as sweet and good as Casper, but not bad, either. Maybe he just keeps finding himself in interesting situations and has a different take on humans because of them. h-mmm
