Life is a basket...
a naani about life15 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are meaningful, interesting, descriptive and creative.
I found this poem to convey the memories of one's life. I liked the
creative idea of memories in a basket. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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The author's words are meaningful, interesting, descriptive and creative.
I found this poem to convey the memories of one's life. I liked the
creative idea of memories in a basket. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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I thank you again for reviewing my work. It certainly helps motivate me to keep trying. elaine
Comment from Sally Law
Super FanStory fantastic in this form, dear poet. You have conveyed a deep thought of life's collections. Aptly illustrated for the presentation.
Sending you my best today as always and my best for the upcoming contest
Sally :))
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Super FanStory fantastic in this form, dear poet. You have conveyed a deep thought of life's collections. Aptly illustrated for the presentation.
Sending you my best today as always and my best for the upcoming contest
Sally :))
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Sally, thanks again for reading and reviewing. I appreciate that so much. elaine
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one, never thought of life that way, nice insight. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one, never thought of life that way, nice insight. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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13, I appreciate your comments. You have reviewed my work before, and it means much to me. elaine
Comment from Tina Crute
The picture is mesmerizing in its simplicity. I wondered what you would write about a basket of fruit. You made something sweet with it! I never thought of life's experiences as being stored in a basket as a mixture, but it is intriguing. Well done!
Tina
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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The picture is mesmerizing in its simplicity. I wondered what you would write about a basket of fruit. You made something sweet with it! I never thought of life's experiences as being stored in a basket as a mixture, but it is intriguing. Well done!
Tina
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reading and responding to my work. elaine
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You're welcome!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like your choice of the basket and
filling it with things taken from life.
-A good concluding line that shows
they become "our memories."
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like your choice of the basket and
filling it with things taken from life.
-A good concluding line that shows
they become "our memories."
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Pam, I appreciate your time and response. elaine
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You are welcome, Elaine.
