Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your image choice and words pair perfectly, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I understand how this
acrostic applies to you and your writing.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

This goes well with your chosen acrostic word, and you do a good job of meeting the requirements whilst expressing your truth with your well phrased piece.

Moke

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Ramona Agin

Excellent

I can relate to this poem. I have only recently started writing in the last few years and my punctuation and grammar are getting better. My friends say that I am talented but I still have a long way to go to improve my skills. Nice work!

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it!