"The Book of Death"
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Comment from dragonpoet
Ricky,
It is hard to understand why we have all these mass shootings. It is so sad so many lose their lives needlessly and so many have to grieve because of it. I think two possible ideas on lessening violence like this is better mental health detection and more restrictive gun control laws.
I found four mistakes shoul - should and Whilean = While an. I don't think that there should be a question mark after equal and Tis should be Is.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Ricky,
It is hard to understand why we have all these mass shootings. It is so sad so many lose their lives needlessly and so many have to grieve because of it. I think two possible ideas on lessening violence like this is better mental health detection and more restrictive gun control laws.
I found four mistakes shoul - should and Whilean = While an. I don't think that there should be a question mark after equal and Tis should be Is.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Why thank you so very much and have a great day
Doctor Ricky1024
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You are most kindly welcome, Ricky.
Same to you.
Joan
Comment from Humza Khan
The poem is quite difficult to follow and I'm not sure about the punctuation. There are lots of question marks and I'm not sure they're all necessary. There's a few apostrophes missing as well.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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The poem is quite difficult to follow and I'm not sure about the punctuation. There are lots of question marks and I'm not sure they're all necessary. There's a few apostrophes missing as well.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Why thank you so very much and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky