Who am I?
my inner bio5 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What a wild ride Jake. It seems you go from one speed to the next without ever shifting gears. World traveler and hit every single state in the USA.
Just a few observations:
Para 6, 3rd sentence: (illness) should be (illnesses)
Para 10, 5th sentence: Add (my) or (the) between (of) and (classmates)
Para 9, 2nd sentence: Add comma between (well) and (diplomatic)
A wonderful close, meeting your long-sought wife. And still being with her after 40 years. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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What a wild ride Jake. It seems you go from one speed to the next without ever shifting gears. World traveler and hit every single state in the USA.
Just a few observations:
Para 6, 3rd sentence: (illness) should be (illnesses)
Para 10, 5th sentence: Add (my) or (the) between (of) and (classmates)
Para 9, 2nd sentence: Add comma between (well) and (diplomatic)
A wonderful close, meeting your long-sought wife. And still being with her after 40 years. Congratulations.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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thanks as always I will go back and fix this.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Jake, what a wonderful and entertaining read! I have no idea who will win the contest, but yours is a worthy contender, good luck. I really like the way you presented the story. It made for great flow. The content is excellent and your life is most interesting! Outstanding work! Terry.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Jake, what a wonderful and entertaining read! I have no idea who will win the contest, but yours is a worthy contender, good luck. I really like the way you presented the story. It made for great flow. The content is excellent and your life is most interesting! Outstanding work! Terry.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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thanks glad you liked it. it was fun writing it and thinking back on my life.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
A fabulously written biography, short and sweet and filling in many questions about who you are, and why did you do what you did, and where you are on the spatially on the globe called earth. Thanks for your contributions.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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A fabulously written biography, short and sweet and filling in many questions about who you are, and why did you do what you did, and where you are on the spatially on the globe called earth. Thanks for your contributions.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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thanks reminds me for some reason of the old beatnik phase they used to coordinate meetings which was from Edgar Burroughs who always asked Jack Kerouac who was always on the move to tell him "his space-time coordinates" so they could meet up somewhere in the physical world.
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funny
Comment from Ramona Agin
Jake you sound like an amazing man. I'd love to meet you and here some of your life stories, I am sure you have quite a few. Well written timeline and flows nicely.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Jake you sound like an amazing man. I'd love to meet you and here some of your life stories, I am sure you have quite a few. Well written timeline and flows nicely.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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yeah I have been around and seen a few things in my 66 years on this planet.thanks
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Jake. I enjoyed
reading it. You gave readers many personal facts--not just
generalizations. From early on in your life, you proved to be
a fighter. Your service to the USA is admirable. I remember
reading about how you met your wife.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Jake. I enjoyed
reading it. You gave readers many personal facts--not just
generalizations. From early on in your life, you proved to be
a fighter. Your service to the USA is admirable. I remember
reading about how you met your wife.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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thanks for your comments