"Poetry from the Broken Heart"
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Comment from country ranch writer
7/5/2022-----6:02 pm
We could t donate my husbands body parts dye to cancer ravegen his whole body so he was cremated and put to rest in his favorite place to rest.when I dieI to will be cremated and joining him.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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7/5/2022-----6:02 pm
We could t donate my husbands body parts dye to cancer ravegen his whole body so he was cremated and put to rest in his favorite place to rest.when I dieI to will be cremated and joining him.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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We can't always donate our loved one.
They have to be still living to a degree.
Fortunately, my son Jason was just brain-dead.
And, we were able to donate him.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky1024
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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your two in one work reminisces the physiology of the heart on one hand, and the imperative of having a heart on the other.
The work highlights the heart's consistency at work; and how it would be totally impossible for one to survive without it.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of similes, onomatopoeias, metaphors, personification, and rhetorical statements that smack of an imagery of the heart's functional perspective.
Exceptional work. Keep the flag flying.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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The objective correlative of your two in one work reminisces the physiology of the heart on one hand, and the imperative of having a heart on the other.
The work highlights the heart's consistency at work; and how it would be totally impossible for one to survive without it.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of similes, onomatopoeias, metaphors, personification, and rhetorical statements that smack of an imagery of the heart's functional perspective.
Exceptional work. Keep the flag flying.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thanks Lloyd much appreciate this one.
Doctor Ricky1024
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Catherine Ballard
Thank you for sharing this chapter from your book of poetry. I enjoyed the rhythm of both poems. I had to Google the word 'romitical' and I'm wondering if perhaps there was misspelling. I'm not sure the multiple question marks work in the second poem as not everything seems to be a question. Would like to read more!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you for sharing this chapter from your book of poetry. I enjoyed the rhythm of both poems. I had to Google the word 'romitical' and I'm wondering if perhaps there was misspelling. I'm not sure the multiple question marks work in the second poem as not everything seems to be a question. Would like to read more!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you Catherine I'm so glad you stopped by.
"Romitical"
You won't find this in the dictionary but it basically means musical heart.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Fleedleflump
I loved your correlation of heart beats and musical rhythms, casting us humans as instruments - we play ourselves with varying levels of expertise, but always feel the music even if others don't. Then Heart of One takes us through a litany of devotion and need. This was excellent.
Mike
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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I loved your correlation of heart beats and musical rhythms, casting us humans as instruments - we play ourselves with varying levels of expertise, but always feel the music even if others don't. Then Heart of One takes us through a litany of devotion and need. This was excellent.
Mike
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thanks Mike for this one.
Doctor Ricky1024