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Just Kiddin'

Joking about my aversion to poor grammar

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the Not funny but funny writing prompt contest.

Hehe... your poem is funny. You have a great imagination. I know it's annoying when people have poor grammar skills. I'm pretty good but far from perfect.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid" --.Atticus

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
    Thank you for your kind review. I love the quote under your name.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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I'm with you partner. I tend to write reviews that may infuriate the author but hey, follow grammatical rules and I won't have to write. Quote marks one space away from the word, or not there at all, or surrounding words that are not at all a quote. Those things rile me. Then no space between the end of a sentence and the first word of the next one. Or no spaces between paragraphs so it all looks like one run on page. Just run a spell checker of any kind, it'll find your goof ups.

Well written poem on a far too abused subject. And, the poem bounces right along, it reads very easily. Good job.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
    Thanks for a great review. It's nice to know I'm not the only one!
Comment from WLHall
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I can't stand to see these kind of mistakes either. Drives me crazy! However, I'm far from perfect and have made my share of mistakes I like the humor and rhyming was spot on. Cleverly executed! Well done!

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
    Thank you very much for this great review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Are you now or were a teacher? Or are you playing the part with my challenge? I find it witty and pithy and exploding with satirical grace and please do not grade my piece for poetic license is always allowed by past current and future authors

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
    Thank you for your review. Yes, for most of my life I was an English teacher in middle and high school. I don't grade papers anymore!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Great work. Great writing. Makes perfect sense.
I don't think you are being fussy at all.
the only question is the sentences. Should they be declarative or compounded?
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
    Thanks for an excellent review and the wonderful stars!
Comment from Wendy G
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Lol. I am with you on the grammar issues. Especially apostrophe errors! I enjoyed your smooth rhyme and smooth flow of the poem. My attitude is that expressing your meaning is more important than forcing your thoughts into poetry rules - too strained usually. Well done. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
    Thank you very much. I appreciate your review.
Comment from zanya
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This is an entertaining, humorous look at the whole grammar debate and when and where and how it all should work -woe betide grammar in these texting, Whats App times ?

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
    Thank you very much for this review. App times?
Comment from jessizero
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This was an excellent poem, and I agree with every word. I have my own pet peeves, and you listed several of them here. Thank you for sharing, and keep up the good work. Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
    Thank you very much, Jessi, for your excellent review.
Comment from Fleedleflump
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Three cheers for this :-). I get very bored of being told someone wasn't taught correctly, when all one has to do is read in order to see the right ways to do things.

This was lots of fun!

Mike

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 Comment Written 04-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
    Thank you so very much, Mike.
Comment from pome lover
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ooo, but you sound most intense .Were/are you a teacher?
My pet peeve is "Where's it at?" I just want to scream. Or "That's where it's at," said on the air by people who should know better.
Your poem definitely makes a good point, but sometimes us "aging" folk forget how to spell things - which I did not anticipate, and I am amazed and saddened by it. (thank heavens for spell check!)
I have a marvelous idea! What if you sent an email to the CEOs of all the major network channels with a few suggested grammatically correct sentences that news people usually get wrong? You could form a committee and have volunteers help. (I'd help) Wouldn't it be marvelous hearing them speak correctly? I'm really kidding, but I wish someone would.
Katharine

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 Comment Written 04-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
    Thanks for your wonderful review! And yes, I was a teacher, too many years to tell!