"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from country ranch writer
7/4/2022-----------1:48 pm.
On holidays it pays ti maje syre your donir card is up tindate so if something unfirtunate happens you can pass life on to some one in need of organs to survive. Many lives are saved by passing parts ti anither. prayers fir one and all ti be safe.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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7/4/2022-----------1:48 pm.
On holidays it pays ti maje syre your donir card is up tindate so if something unfirtunate happens you can pass life on to some one in need of organs to survive. Many lives are saved by passing parts ti anither. prayers fir one and all ti be safe.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Yes, I totally agree and thanks.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love your structure of starting a stanza by posing a word, then exploring that word in the verse that follows. On tony spag on this one:
'Cpme along with me and have some Fun?' - should be 'Come' at the start.
Mike
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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I love your structure of starting a stanza by posing a word, then exploring that word in the verse that follows. On tony spag on this one:
'Cpme along with me and have some Fun?' - should be 'Come' at the start.
Mike
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thanks Mike and I recreated and corrected this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
