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The Inn at Blackpool

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Sick Sack Soup"
These are free-verse poems.

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Comment from prettybluebirds
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This writing gave me a much-needed laugh. I love your descriptions of the chili and the reactions to it. I truly enjoyed reading this and it should do well in the contest. I wish you worlds of luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
    So sorry for the late response....a major device outage here.....thanks so much ...these are fun to stitch together......although a little scatter shot....

    Godspeed to you and yours.....Stu Harrell
Comment from C2
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Stu,
I enjoyed this funny take on a surprise Indian-syle barbecue. The reactions of the different characters as the reality of their dilemma dawns on them was well-executed and kept a smile on my face.

Happy Fourth and thanks for your service!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
    Thanks so very much....so sorry for late response...had a major outage here....These are fun to write though a bit raggedy....

    Best to you and yours....Stu Harrell