Invisibility
Having fun, feeling free with...6 total reviews
Comment from Mama Baer
Love, love, love this one, Sharon! You have such a way with poetry! That would, indeed, be a very cool superpower. I have been away for a while, and it is so nice to read your work again. Sending good wishes your way!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Love, love, love this one, Sharon! You have such a way with poetry! That would, indeed, be a very cool superpower. I have been away for a while, and it is so nice to read your work again. Sending good wishes your way!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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I'm so glad you're back! Thanks so much for this exceptional review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I have often thought of just that, being invisible and going into a bank and so on and so on. You could never be identified and hopefully an invisible finger would leave only invisible fingerprints.
Nice fantasizing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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I have often thought of just that, being invisible and going into a bank and so on and so on. You could never be identified and hopefully an invisible finger would leave only invisible fingerprints.
Nice fantasizing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you! I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from viking
Wow, great imaginary and the poem is written so well. Your unseen and unheard adventures sund like lots of fun.
I truly enjoyed reading your poem.
Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Wow, great imaginary and the poem is written so well. Your unseen and unheard adventures sund like lots of fun.
I truly enjoyed reading your poem.
Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from LisaMay
I think it is only natural to sometimes want to be invisible and engage in naughty activities that we would never act on in real life. The anonymity of invisibility would be the superpower I would most like to have, to spy on people and hear what they really think.. but maybe all my illusions would be shattered and I'd end up very unhappy.
Your poem has effective rhythm and rhyme and is entertaining. If you suddenly get rich and I hear a bank has been robbed, I am going to be VERY suspicious!!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I think it is only natural to sometimes want to be invisible and engage in naughty activities that we would never act on in real life. The anonymity of invisibility would be the superpower I would most like to have, to spy on people and hear what they really think.. but maybe all my illusions would be shattered and I'd end up very unhappy.
Your poem has effective rhythm and rhyme and is entertaining. If you suddenly get rich and I hear a bank has been robbed, I am going to be VERY suspicious!!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Hahaha! Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from lancellot
This is very well made. You touched on several aspects of being invisible and you got the moral implications of theft, but quickly reminded the 'Good people of FanStory' you would not do this. Smart move. Good pacing and rhymes.
Looks like another winner for you.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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This is very well made. You touched on several aspects of being invisible and you got the moral implications of theft, but quickly reminded the 'Good people of FanStory' you would not do this. Smart move. Good pacing and rhymes.
Looks like another winner for you.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this fantastic review, it truly makes my day. :)
Comment from jessizero
This poem was fun! You make it sound like a wonderful super power to have. I personally wanted to be telekinetic, but you've made me reconsider. Thank you so much for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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This poem was fun! You make it sound like a wonderful super power to have. I personally wanted to be telekinetic, but you've made me reconsider. Thank you so much for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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My daughter thinks teleportation is the way to go.we argued about this for an hour🙄. Thanks so much for this great review. :)
