Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from royowen
So Ali has attracted some pretty hard repercussions with her attempt to make Rogers pay for his rather sleezy methods with dealing with women looking for loans they needed badly, but it seems there are some highly moral men here to assist. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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So Ali has attracted some pretty hard repercussions with her attempt to make Rogers pay for his rather sleezy methods with dealing with women looking for loans they needed badly, but it seems there are some highly moral men here to assist. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from John Ciarmello
Another great chapter Barbara! Suspenseful and scary now for Cordero and Ali and possibly the entire family. I hope Cordero doesn't do anything foolish to protect Ali, but I wouldn't blame him. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Another great chapter Barbara! Suspenseful and scary now for Cordero and Ali and possibly the entire family. I hope Cordero doesn't do anything foolish to protect Ali, but I wouldn't blame him. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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One never knows what Cord might do. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Fleedleflump
Another excellent chapter :-). It's sad to think there are still people in the world who'll get violent just because they can't have everything they want, but I've no doubt it's true!
Mike
Only one spaggie I noticed:
'With the crimes, Ali's alleged against him, he could be facing some serious jail time.' - I think that first comma needs to come out.
PS: Really glad to hear Steven's surgery went well :-)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Another excellent chapter :-). It's sad to think there are still people in the world who'll get violent just because they can't have everything they want, but I've no doubt it's true!
Mike
Only one spaggie I noticed:
'With the crimes, Ali's alleged against him, he could be facing some serious jail time.' - I think that first comma needs to come out.
PS: Really glad to hear Steven's surgery went well :-)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Pesky comma removed. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
I hope Steven is continuing to do well. I suspected Pat was behind Luke kidnaping Ali. There's also a witness to their plotting, so that's good. Hopefully, Sam will be able to nail them. Pat seems to have a way of weaseling out of any difficulty that arises. He definitely needs to be prosecuted. Those security cameras sound like a great idea. It's ironic that Ali is having so much trouble in what should be a peaceful town whereas the only problem she had in NY was her no=good fiance. Great explanation for the attack on Ali. Have a happy Fourth. judi
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I hope Steven is continuing to do well. I suspected Pat was behind Luke kidnaping Ali. There's also a witness to their plotting, so that's good. Hopefully, Sam will be able to nail them. Pat seems to have a way of weaseling out of any difficulty that arises. He definitely needs to be prosecuted. Those security cameras sound like a great idea. It's ironic that Ali is having so much trouble in what should be a peaceful town whereas the only problem she had in NY was her no=good fiance. Great explanation for the attack on Ali. Have a happy Fourth. judi
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
It seems that things are really heating up with this guy Pat getting dangerously risky. Something tells me that he may be biting off more than he can handle going up against Cord and the law. I will be very happy when he is brought to justice and has to pay for his misdeeds.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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It seems that things are really heating up with this guy Pat getting dangerously risky. Something tells me that he may be biting off more than he can handle going up against Cord and the law. I will be very happy when he is brought to justice and has to pay for his misdeeds.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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I can promise a few twists. LOl Thank you for the kind review.
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Eagerly awaiting any and all developments.
Comment from amahra
Good chapter, Barbara. So glad Alexandria's nightmare is over. Just one thing below.
He nodded. ["That's plan.]? I tried before I came out, but he wasn't in his office or at home." [Did you mean, 'that's the plan?'] I wasn't sure.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Good chapter, Barbara. So glad Alexandria's nightmare is over. Just one thing below.
He nodded. ["That's plan.]? I tried before I came out, but he wasn't in his office or at home." [Did you mean, 'that's the plan?'] I wasn't sure.
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the catch. I have a problem leaving out those little words. When I edit, I read it as though they're there. I appreciate the help. Ali's problems are really just getting started.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm so pleased Steven came through surgery well, Barbara, that must have been a relief for you.
This was a great chapter. I don't think I'd let Ali out of my sight if I was Cord. With that slimeball on the loose, you just don't know. I really enjoyed this part. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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I'm so pleased Steven came through surgery well, Barbara, that must have been a relief for you.
This was a great chapter. I don't think I'd let Ali out of my sight if I was Cord. With that slimeball on the loose, you just don't know. I really enjoyed this part. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra x
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Glad Steven's surgery went well. Even the surgeries we expect to go well, don't always, so it's a relief to have them over and done with. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Glad Steven's surgery went well. Even the surgeries we expect to go well, don't always, so it's a relief to have them over and done with. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
