Sunset
love of life3 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is really beautiful and it is not easy to write these short poems for contest. You did a great job with this. I like each line and the last line however is best
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This is really beautiful and it is not easy to write these short poems for contest. You did a great job with this. I like each line and the last line however is best
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
Comment from Ele-vi
Thank you for existing in this life as it allows me to know I exist because of you. For what are words that are not spoken yet heard through the eyes and felt by the heart
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Thank you for existing in this life as it allows me to know I exist because of you. For what are words that are not spoken yet heard through the eyes and felt by the heart
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
Comment from lyenochka
I think there are lots of times in any relationship where we may have "eclipsed" one another's dreams. I think we can pray for good rains of hope for both and healing. Best wishes in the contest!
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I think there are lots of times in any relationship where we may have "eclipsed" one another's dreams. I think we can pray for good rains of hope for both and healing. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
