"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
In as much as l miss the yet to be written part of the story, let me suffice with the part already written.
Your work, albeit, seemingly incomplete, reminisces the surge of "liberty and justice for all" as exemplified in some people likening life to partying and dancing.
The work highlights a rather oblique way of debunking this dictum of life being a party and dance affair by making allusions to the ambivalence of good and bad associated with the month of march. The work further attests to its assertion by citing the "Et tu brute" cries that were made on the ides of march as happening in the same month, precisely on the 31st of March, 2003, when Nicole, the protagonist's daughter celebrated her birthday on Liberty Avenue. Irrevocably, life is not all about party and dance, but Ululation as well.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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In as much as l miss the yet to be written part of the story, let me suffice with the part already written.
Your work, albeit, seemingly incomplete, reminisces the surge of "liberty and justice for all" as exemplified in some people likening life to partying and dancing.
The work highlights a rather oblique way of debunking this dictum of life being a party and dance affair by making allusions to the ambivalence of good and bad associated with the month of march. The work further attests to its assertion by citing the "Et tu brute" cries that were made on the ides of march as happening in the same month, precisely on the 31st of March, 2003, when Nicole, the protagonist's daughter celebrated her birthday on Liberty Avenue. Irrevocably, life is not all about party and dance, but Ululation as well.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thanks Lloyd and this is now been completed 1,717 words.
Doctor Ricky
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Folly nestor Sena
Chacun a sa définition de la vie. On définit la vie selon notre propre vision et chacun a la raison de projecter son idée où il veut et comment il veut en ce qui concerne la vie.Et peu importe les raisons de vie , chacun auras toujours raison
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Chacun a sa définition de la vie. On définit la vie selon notre propre vision et chacun a la raison de projecter son idée où il veut et comment il veut en ce qui concerne la vie.Et peu importe les raisons de vie , chacun auras toujours raison
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Sorry we don't understand that language here.
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Ok I see. It's french. I speak English also but not too much like every body. French is my specialty. I will try to learn more from everyone here. Thank you very much for your remak.
