Why You?
Reversed Joining Nonets20 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
Very nicely structured poem, seamless lines. I appreciate this poem for its geometry, themes and representations.
-Most sparkling line in your poem: shining presence on starless nights, calming breeze engulfing all...
It feels here like you've created a space in the poem that envelops us in a moment and that delicately unfolds to a wondrous light,
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Very nicely structured poem, seamless lines. I appreciate this poem for its geometry, themes and representations.
-Most sparkling line in your poem: shining presence on starless nights, calming breeze engulfing all...
It feels here like you've created a space in the poem that envelops us in a moment and that delicately unfolds to a wondrous light,
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your excellent and most encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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My pleasure 🌸
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem. I can tell you improved in your writing. The presentation is lovely too. It's very romantic. Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Excellent poem. I can tell you improved in your writing. The presentation is lovely too. It's very romantic. Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Val Crisson
Beautifully written and a very thought provoking piece. The presentation is stunning, as is the love story told here. "a shining , on starless nights" - beautiful imagery". The title was a little off for me," but then again it's your poem. This is one lucky "girl"
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Beautifully written and a very thought provoking piece. The presentation is stunning, as is the love story told here. "a shining , on starless nights" - beautiful imagery". The title was a little off for me," but then again it's your poem. This is one lucky "girl"
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
These reverse nonets, Why You?, have the proper formatting and tell the story of a man and a woman and the wonderful life that keeps the poems coming. Nice.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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These reverse nonets, Why You?, have the proper formatting and tell the story of a man and a woman and the wonderful life that keeps the poems coming. Nice.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
Well done with this nonet Kim. My wife is a rock, a reflection of Christlike essence that is my best friend and my closest confidante, beautifully written my friend, a nicely shaped double nonet, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Well done with this nonet Kim. My wife is a rock, a reflection of Christlike essence that is my best friend and my closest confidante, beautifully written my friend, a nicely shaped double nonet, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Roy, a rock what a wonderful description, your comments as always are very much appreciated****kahpot
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Well done
Comment from Fleedleflump
I adore your second stanza's opening lines - they're the best bit of an excellent piece, speaking of utter love and contentment - something we all crave and the luckiest find. I also love that you end with self discovery.
I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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I adore your second stanza's opening lines - they're the best bit of an excellent piece, speaking of utter love and contentment - something we all crave and the luckiest find. I also love that you end with self discovery.
I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful and understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
These are interesting nonets. Both talk about a girl who came into your life but from two different perspectives. I like them both they each have their own way of saying how your heart is fulfilled by the love of your life. These are upbeat and positive and give me a feeling of release from worry. You've found what you have looked for and now you feel content.
Thanks for writing a bit about yourself.
It has been great to see you doing all right.
Jesse
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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These are interesting nonets. Both talk about a girl who came into your life but from two different perspectives. I like them both they each have their own way of saying how your heart is fulfilled by the love of your life. These are upbeat and positive and give me a feeling of release from worry. You've found what you have looked for and now you feel content.
Thanks for writing a bit about yourself.
It has been great to see you doing all right.
Jesse
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you Jesse, yes, I think love has many challenges and I am glad you have read that it is a positive and upbeat feeling. as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
WOW! This is an exceptional poem in every respect--skillfully and creatively composed, vividly descriptive of the establishing of a wonderful relationship, effectively blending literal and figurative language.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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WOW! This is an exceptional poem in every respect--skillfully and creatively composed, vividly descriptive of the establishing of a wonderful relationship, effectively blending literal and figurative language.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the six stars and most of all for understanding what I was trying to express, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is beautiful, Kahpot. I've never seen one of these aesthetically pleasing to the eye and your words are true to their meaning. I loved it! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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This is beautiful, Kahpot. I've never seen one of these aesthetically pleasing to the eye and your words are true to their meaning. I loved it! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this most encouraging review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
This is creative, unique and beautiful! The presentation and words highlight the joy of finding that soul mate and contentment one starry night. Lovely! I might try this format sometime myself...
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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This is creative, unique and beautiful! The presentation and words highlight the joy of finding that soul mate and contentment one starry night. Lovely! I might try this format sometime myself...
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Wow! Thank you very much for your most exceptional and encouraging comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
