A Gloryland Eternity
The joy to be found in heaven9 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your meditation on Heaven. My favorite lines were:
"I never will have need again for sun
Nor even lamp, for Jesus is the light,"
That alludes to the promises in Revelation 21!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
Loved your meditation on Heaven. My favorite lines were:
"I never will have need again for sun
Nor even lamp, for Jesus is the light,"
That alludes to the promises in Revelation 21!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the review. Heaven surely looks good. Still I'm thankful for God's help here on the journey.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello. What a lovely verse that is calming and full of assurance. The artwork sets the stage for your flowing metered verse. Well done on this masterpiece. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
Hello. What a lovely verse that is calming and full of assurance. The artwork sets the stage for your flowing metered verse. Well done on this masterpiece. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for a great review, Melissa.
Comment from Wendy G
I can't think of anything more uplifting than being with Jesus, and being under His righteous rule of love and grace, with all nature restored and in harmony. I sense your joy and enthusiasm, and I share it. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
I can't think of anything more uplifting than being with Jesus, and being under His righteous rule of love and grace, with all nature restored and in harmony. I sense your joy and enthusiasm, and I share it. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the marvelous review and my favorite stars. I agree with your words about Jesus and look forward to meeting you in heaven.
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That will be wonderful.
Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I certainly agree with your thoughts. That being said, a great testimony, and now what might your thoughts be if there is life after death about life before birth?
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
I certainly agree with your thoughts. That being said, a great testimony, and now what might your thoughts be if there is life after death about life before birth?
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your excellent review. As to your questions- my faith is based on the Bible that says God is the creator, and He created all life from the beginning and with free will to choose life with Him now and forever, while Satan is the destroyer of life, now and forever.
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Exactly. I am with you knowing we will live hereafter but how was life before birth? Jer 1:5
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An indication is given that after death of our bodies, Christian's souls go to be with God. Then at Jesus second coming, bodies will rise to be replaced with new bodies. As for before life, God is not in our time and space continuum. He is omniscient beyond our understanding. (I'm not conversant with all prophecy-I just know I want to be with Him always in whatever form He chooses.)
Comment from Christine Geyer
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was uplifting and met all requirements outlined. It is easy to see that you take joy in thinking of eternity and wish to share this joy with others. It is encouraging in these trying times. The flow of the poem could have been improved but I think overall you did well
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was uplifting and met all requirements outlined. It is easy to see that you take joy in thinking of eternity and wish to share this joy with others. It is encouraging in these trying times. The flow of the poem could have been improved but I think overall you did well
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Tyletta Staton
That was so moving! The visual imagery was spectacular. I could picture smiling faces.and feel the love you probably felt writing your poem. Great job!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
That was so moving! The visual imagery was spectacular. I could picture smiling faces.and feel the love you probably felt writing your poem. Great job!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your review.
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Comment from jessizero
This poem was truly uplifting. It was a great description of what comes when life on earth is over. I hope to experience it someday. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
This poem was truly uplifting. It was a great description of what comes when life on earth is over. I hope to experience it someday. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Jessi.than
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a lovely piece about the anticipated afterlife and the hope of sharing it with others. You use some effective imagery to express your excitement and joy in the face of fulfilling purpose.
Mike
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
This is a lovely piece about the anticipated afterlife and the hope of sharing it with others. You use some effective imagery to express your excitement and joy in the face of fulfilling purpose.
Mike
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Mike.
Comment from royowen
Well done with this pentametric poem, with a varying aba rhyme pattern, skilfully woven in. But it's the storyline I really like with its scriptural promise of joy forevermore's ruling theme, hallelujah, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
Well done with this pentametric poem, with a varying aba rhyme pattern, skilfully woven in. But it's the storyline I really like with its scriptural promise of joy forevermore's ruling theme, hallelujah, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much, Roy.
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Most welcome