Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "~Tangled up in Blue~"Romantic Tanka Poems
27 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
Tangled up in hope and anxiety, and all hopes may soon be fulfilled, or perhaps it may all be in vain. At this moment, however, hope seems ready for fulfillment, and the distance travelled will make it all the more worthwhile.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Tangled up in hope and anxiety, and all hopes may soon be fulfilled, or perhaps it may all be in vain. At this moment, however, hope seems ready for fulfillment, and the distance travelled will make it all the more worthwhile.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Mark, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
"We are all wanderers on this earth. Our hearts are full of wonder, and our souls are deep with dreams." -Gypsy Proverbs
Comment from Heather Burroughs
This poem is beautiful, romantic, tantalizing poem. You did a wonderful job. Thank you for sharing your work. Many blessings to you and your loved ones.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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This poem is beautiful, romantic, tantalizing poem. You did a wonderful job. Thank you for sharing your work. Many blessings to you and your loved ones.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy ♡
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."--Atticus
Comment from Gloria ....
I very much enjoy the sensuousness of your tanka suite. I love how the distance between the two hearts is illustrated by the roses in a vase dreaming all alone, while the heart of the beloved beats like the lighthouse strobing in the dark.
Well, well done. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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I very much enjoy the sensuousness of your tanka suite. I love how the distance between the two hearts is illustrated by the roses in a vase dreaming all alone, while the heart of the beloved beats like the lighthouse strobing in the dark.
Well, well done. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Gloria,
Thank you very much for your time and kind words.
Gypsy ♡
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another romantic tanka poem about love, lust, dreams, and in-between. like the stanza about dreams the best as I am a big time believer in the power of dreams.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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another romantic tanka poem about love, lust, dreams, and in-between. like the stanza about dreams the best as I am a big time believer in the power of dreams.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind words.
Gypsy
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine intimate and passionate love poem about togetherness and reuniting with a loved one, a very romantic and delicate Tanka, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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A fine intimate and passionate love poem about togetherness and reuniting with a loved one, a very romantic and delicate Tanka, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind words.
Gypsy ♡
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
This is a beautiful poem and the painting you chose as illustration is lovely. I especially love the line, "a lighthouse that guides me out of the dark and into your arms." So evocative!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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This is a beautiful poem and the painting you chose as illustration is lovely. I especially love the line, "a lighthouse that guides me out of the dark and into your arms." So evocative!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.Atticus
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the sensation of transference you manage to conjure here, starting the image of loving attachment, then using that as the guiding ligt to be romantically together, even if physically apart. This is beautifully written - I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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I love the sensation of transference you manage to conjure here, starting the image of loving attachment, then using that as the guiding ligt to be romantically together, even if physically apart. This is beautifully written - I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Hugs♡
☆Gypsy☆
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason."-- Novalis
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Your image fits well with the dreamy and very romantic words. Yet, the words hang in the air when it comes to the feeling of separation from a loved one. Using the image of a lighthouse searching in the dark for the loved one is pure genius.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Your image fits well with the dreamy and very romantic words. Yet, the words hang in the air when it comes to the feeling of separation from a loved one. Using the image of a lighthouse searching in the dark for the loved one is pure genius.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, mary, for your time and exceptional six stars review Hugs♡
☆Gypsy☆
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason."-- Novalis
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a nice dual tanka which tells the positive and negative of flowers. They show the love of your better half but also remind you that they are not there. So the blue that they are tangled in is loneliness.
But you know they will return so you have hope.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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This is a nice dual tanka which tells the positive and negative of flowers. They show the love of your better half but also remind you that they are not there. So the blue that they are tangled in is loneliness.
But you know they will return so you have hope.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Joan,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy♡
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason. Novalis
Comment from Sugarray77
Whew, you hit a home run with this one, Gypsy. This Tanka is so meaningful and the two compliment and reflect off of each other. I thoroughly enjoyed read them. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Whew, you hit a home run with this one, Gypsy. This Tanka is so meaningful and the two compliment and reflect off of each other. I thoroughly enjoyed read them. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Melissa ♡ I appreciate your exceptional six stars review. You are very kind.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis