Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "So Not"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
8 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
You crazy man!!! I absolutely love your humor and the way you brandish it like a wand into this inane and 'oh so fun' verse. Well done on all points and I am glad to say ... you are my friend. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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You crazy man!!! I absolutely love your humor and the way you brandish it like a wand into this inane and 'oh so fun' verse. Well done on all points and I am glad to say ... you are my friend. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Melissa. Friends!
Comment from Ric Myworld
ROFL! Witty with a forever sense of humor capable of helping us look at the brighter sides of almost everything, except ants chomping on our brains. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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ROFL! Witty with a forever sense of humor capable of helping us look at the brighter sides of almost everything, except ants chomping on our brains. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Ric, for the physical reaction to the *so not*. Bill
Comment from Dawn Munro
AaaaaaaaaaaaaHAHAHAHAHA!!!
I'm sorry, I suppose I should not laugh -
perhaps you really meant to write to form!
But then again, I guess a social gaffe
these days is really what we call "the norm"...
Priceless, Bill. I loved you 'not' sonnet. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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AaaaaaaaaaaaaHAHAHAHAHA!!!
I'm sorry, I suppose I should not laugh -
perhaps you really meant to write to form!
But then again, I guess a social gaffe
these days is really what we call "the norm"...
Priceless, Bill. I loved you 'not' sonnet. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Dawn.
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My pleasure, Bill.
Comment from kahpot
Despite yourself, you are a clever man, I tried to stop reading after the first stanza but could not your way with words demands the reader continues, thank you for the smiles, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Despite yourself, you are a clever man, I tried to stop reading after the first stanza but could not your way with words demands the reader continues, thank you for the smiles, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you, kahpot, for the kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, very inventive and I read it all to find that your sonnet is well rhymed and metered and I was entertained by your unusual approach and sentiments here, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Ha ha ha, very inventive and I read it all to find that your sonnet is well rhymed and metered and I was entertained by your unusual approach and sentiments here, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Dolly. I consider that high praise.
Comment from BethShelby
I don't know if sonnets are supposed to make one laugh until they hurt, but most of your poems awaken my funny bone. It was the second verse that cracked me up. The line in the third verse about eyes being devoured by ants that is well illustrated by the picture.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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I don't know if sonnets are supposed to make one laugh until they hurt, but most of your poems awaken my funny bone. It was the second verse that cracked me up. The line in the third verse about eyes being devoured by ants that is well illustrated by the picture.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Beth, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Bill, my friend, whether fine prose or junk like ruined panty hose. I believe most everybody knows. Even though what you sometimes write is not always a pleasant sight, I guess you do your best, and so nonetheless, we give you a nod of approval, even if you did not pass the class.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Bill, my friend, whether fine prose or junk like ruined panty hose. I believe most everybody knows. Even though what you sometimes write is not always a pleasant sight, I guess you do your best, and so nonetheless, we give you a nod of approval, even if you did not pass the class.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you, nomi, for the excellent review. Bill
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Of course. I will always tease you because I believe that is the rue nature of our friendship. I will never be mean or nasty toward you, because, believe it or not I genuinely like you.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Of course, you are a good friend to many here even if you write about the "lethargic lettered verse" of sonnets which are "so not" a sonnet according to some. But I'm not picky about sonnets.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Lol. Of course, you are a good friend to many here even if you write about the "lethargic lettered verse" of sonnets which are "so not" a sonnet according to some. But I'm not picky about sonnets.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Helen, for the excellent review. Bill
