Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

An interesting poem. The flow is good. The presentation is elegant. The language is simple with a calm undertone.

Thanks for sharing. A very pleasant read.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022

Thank you so much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for sharing the "armchair view of the stars." I always wished we had an easy way to gaze at the stars but since it's mostly cloudy here we don't get to see them anyway.
Comments:
content among nights beauty ~ (night's)
The preposition "among" usually implies between multiple things so maybe even: content among night's beauties ~

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022

Thank you very much, I will have to learn to trust myself, I first had content then change it, I think your advice and help are sinking in and I don't realize it yet, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Kahpot, the night sky is just beautiful. Your haiku is filled with good imagery. I especially liked:

armchair view of the stars
(I can see it)

Well done. Great photo choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer


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 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022

Thank you and yes wouldn't it be great to have that view, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Exceptional

Hi kahpot,
I really like this! Your imagery is spectacular and your satori is really clever. I liked the way you personified the crescent moon in your second line. I can just see myself sitting back in that moon with a martini and enjoying the stars. Lol

Thank for such a wonderful read.
Katiemae Dead

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022

Wow! Thank you very much, I really like the way you say why and what you like about the works you read, it is very encouraging and helpful, as always so very much appreciated****kahpot PS. martini sounds good

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

This is a fine haiku. The last line is a great twist to the poem and a very vivid image: armchair view of the stars. I love it. Great entry for the club. Well done.

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 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022

Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot