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Random Rhyme and Petty Prose

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Type Until It's Poetry"
a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

7 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
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Even dreams can give the muse a kick in the A.. news and sports reports can be very confusing sometimes, coffee is the hope of the weary, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    Thanks, kahpot
Comment from nomi338
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Such are the fruits of desperation. A writer desperate to be brilliant at the midnight hour will write some very strange verbiage. After a good number of hours spent asleep, the writer may revisit his work from the previous night and wonder what fool snuck in during the night and wrote some strange gibberish on his computer screen.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
    Thanks, nomi
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, methinks you need more sleep at night. Diamondbacks won 7 to 11 the scoreboard says. But razorbacks are what the Texans call javelina so it's definitely a different beast!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
    They'd probably beat the Tigers too.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good prattle you have penned. You used very good descriptive words letting your mind flow as to what was on your mind. I think mowing the grass if high up on the list my friend. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
    Mowing!! Thanks, Teri
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Yes, sometimes, the mind just sort of takes off without us, but I guess it's better than the alternative, when the short term memory turns to mush. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Ric. I plead Monday.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Haha, the musings of the sleep-deprived, right?
I enjoyed your fun story--poem/prose--porose.
Who knows? Who cares? However, it gave me a
laugh, and the image is supportive.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
    Thank you, Jan
Comment from Fleedleflump
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Lol, I've been here - typing without a goal, striking away at the tinder block, hoping for a spark. Usually it works, if only a little at times. You made me smile, so I say it was worth it :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Mike.