Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Monday is for Mowing"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
15 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
Your story made me laugh. I would have gone back to bed, too! Poor Larry. Thank you so much for writing this short piece and for sharing it. Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Your story made me laugh. I would have gone back to bed, too! Poor Larry. Thank you so much for writing this short piece and for sharing it. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Jessizero
Comment from Annmuma
This post made me smile .. and I'm not even sure why. I just enjoyed the read and so many Mondays are such that one should just go back to bed. I enjoyed the chapter. ann
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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This post made me smile .. and I'm not even sure why. I just enjoyed the read and so many Mondays are such that one should just go back to bed. I enjoyed the chapter. ann
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Annmuma
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That is some overgrowth that I am not sure a lawn mower would cope with! Larry is one lazy guy who likes his bed too much! A fun write Bill, entertaining, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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That is some overgrowth that I am not sure a lawn mower would cope with! Larry is one lazy guy who likes his bed too much! A fun write Bill, entertaining, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from kahpot
I can relate to Larry I too like my bed, I had to think about "grass on his lawn" then realized you mow the grass to make the lawn, I believe everyone should be responsible for cutting their own grass, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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I can relate to Larry I too like my bed, I had to think about "grass on his lawn" then realized you mow the grass to make the lawn, I believe everyone should be responsible for cutting their own grass, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Sounds about right to me. THe sentiment and logic are so essentially "summer" and tempting. I remember the joy of long grass. The picture is a great image to accompany the story.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Sounds about right to me. THe sentiment and logic are so essentially "summer" and tempting. I remember the joy of long grass. The picture is a great image to accompany the story.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Nancy
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Comment from nomi338
This is the very reason I have hired a gardener. It is so refreshing to come out of my house and see my yard professionally groomed. I did not have to break a sweat to make it happen. The small amount of money it cost me was well worth it.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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This is the very reason I have hired a gardener. It is so refreshing to come out of my house and see my yard professionally groomed. I did not have to break a sweat to make it happen. The small amount of money it cost me was well worth it.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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My lawn mower broke down. $140 for one job and $200 for the next. I?ve been clipped.
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I pay my gardener $40.00 a month, sit back in the shade sipping an ice cold lemonade while he sweats in the hot California sun. A win, win. He gets money, I avoid a heart attack.
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Send him to Michigan.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a great tale of procrastination and lack of motivation. You have told it concisely and yet with good imagery, if that isn't too much of a contradiction in terms. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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This is a great tale of procrastination and lack of motivation. You have told it concisely and yet with good imagery, if that isn't too much of a contradiction in terms. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Kate
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well if he let his own grass go unmowed for two weeks,
then the church group doesn't need his laziness. I enjoyed
your fun story, Bill. It read well with great imagery--esp
the LIWilder one.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Well if he let his own grass go unmowed for two weeks,
then the church group doesn't need his laziness. I enjoyed
your fun story, Bill. It read well with great imagery--esp
the LIWilder one.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! You were describing our lawn last week but it's already halfway to a field of wheat now. We have so much rain that the grass grows and a ton of buttercups speckle that wheat field now along with bamboo...
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Lol! You were describing our lawn last week but it's already halfway to a field of wheat now. We have so much rain that the grass grows and a ton of buttercups speckle that wheat field now along with bamboo...
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Call Larry.
Comment from Spitfire
Larry is a procrastinator as evidenced by his 'hip wide' lawn. He doesn't seem to be a team player either. If this guy is married, I don't think it will last long. Love the verbal image of Laura Ingalls.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Larry is a procrastinator as evidenced by his 'hip wide' lawn. He doesn't seem to be a team player either. If this guy is married, I don't think it will last long. Love the verbal image of Laura Ingalls.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Larry is some kind of stooge. : )
