Friendship Day
A contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, aryr, with your contest entry,
Your words plus art choice pair perfectly. I like the
end rhymes, the smooth flow, and the great message.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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You did a great job, aryr, with your contest entry,
Your words plus art choice pair perfectly. I like the
end rhymes, the smooth flow, and the great message.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Jan for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
And every day should be international friendship day, to your point.
I can hear your pleas in this poem, which comes as across as passionate and from the heart.
Good luck in the contest, and continue to practice acts of kindness. It costs nothing:-)
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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And every day should be international friendship day, to your point.
I can hear your pleas in this poem, which comes as across as passionate and from the heart.
Good luck in the contest, and continue to practice acts of kindness. It costs nothing:-)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Pam for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments. I really love your last sentence. 😁
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, you are right aryr, that every day should be national friendship day.
If that was so wouldwide then war would no longer happen. I like the artwork chosen to illustrate the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Yes, you are right aryr, that every day should be national friendship day.
If that was so wouldwide then war would no longer happen. I like the artwork chosen to illustrate the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you dragonpoet for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments.
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You?re welcome on all accounts.
Joan
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, have a message, are descriptive and
creative. The artwork is amazing and the words in it compliment
this poem. The poem flows and connects well. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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The author's words are interesting, have a message, are descriptive and
creative. The artwork is amazing and the words in it compliment
this poem. The poem flows and connects well. Great Poem!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much harmony13 for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Aryr,
Excellent entry for the Write a Friendship Poem! contest. Every day should be friendship day. What a lovely thought.
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -- Atticus
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Hello, Aryr,
Excellent entry for the Write a Friendship Poem! contest. Every day should be friendship day. What a lovely thought.
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -- Atticus
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Gypsy Blue Rose for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderful day to celebrate as we all need our loyal friends in this world and I enjoyed those fine words here, a good entry for the contest, I wish you luck, I enjoyed it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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A wonderful day to celebrate as we all need our loyal friends in this world and I enjoyed those fine words here, a good entry for the contest, I wish you luck, I enjoyed it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much my friend for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments.
Comment from damommy
Thanks for letting us know. I hope it makes a difference around the world. I'm proud to call you friend. And you've written a lovely poem for the contest. Good luck. Beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thanks for letting us know. I hope it makes a difference around the world. I'm proud to call you friend. And you've written a lovely poem for the contest. Good luck. Beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Yvonne for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I hope so too.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I think every day should be friendship day :-). Perhaps we'd all make more effort to stay in touch with one another. I thought your poem was great - many thanks for posting.
Mike
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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I think every day should be friendship day :-). Perhaps we'd all make more effort to stay in touch with one another. I thought your poem was great - many thanks for posting.
Mike
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Mike for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments.
Comment from Pantygynt
And of course the same sentiments will apply tomorrow when that day will still be 'today' not yesterday and so even if those other two days ang around it will always be today when you are there too,
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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And of course the same sentiments will apply tomorrow when that day will still be 'today' not yesterday and so even if those other two days ang around it will always be today when you are there too,
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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That is so true. Thank you Pantygynt for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, aryr.
-You wrote a good poem for Friendship Day.
-Good reasons for celebrating the day,
along with effective rhyme.
-I like the emphasis of the importance of
celebrating today, and not putting it off
or just disregarding it.
-The world needs many days like this.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, aryr.
-You wrote a good poem for Friendship Day.
-Good reasons for celebrating the day,
along with effective rhyme.
-I like the emphasis of the importance of
celebrating today, and not putting it off
or just disregarding it.
-The world needs many days like this.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Pam for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments.
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You are very welcome, aryr.
