Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Unjestered"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
11 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Aw, bless, Harlequin. He doesn't have an easy time of it, and you show that so very well in this wonderful haiku. I wish it had been part of a contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Aw, bless, Harlequin. He doesn't have an easy time of it, and you show that so very well in this wonderful haiku. I wish it had been part of a contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those unusual clowns and harlequins are a little scary and have been used in films to scare the audience, but when they are sad we always feel sorry for them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Those unusual clowns and harlequins are a little scary and have been used in films to scare the audience, but when they are sad we always feel sorry for them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from kahpot
It is nice to see well-written words give the reader an image all on their own, with wonderful alliteration as the clown's face becomes not so friendly very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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It is nice to see well-written words give the reader an image all on their own, with wonderful alliteration as the clown's face becomes not so friendly very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Teri7
Bill,This is a very well written haiku poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Bill,This is a very well written haiku poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Ric Myworld
Words paint many pictures. From funny to scary and all place in between. Clowns have always given me a eerie feeling deep in my gut, from Chuckie to Stephen King's IT. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Words paint many pictures. From funny to scary and all place in between. Clowns have always given me a eerie feeling deep in my gut, from Chuckie to Stephen King's IT. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Ric.
Comment from nomi338
I am a man who normally faces danger with strength. I am also wise enough to recognize when the situation requires to make a swift departure. on encountering these two, my mind will dictate that I do a swift about face and engage in swift movement toward the exit.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I am a man who normally faces danger with strength. I am also wise enough to recognize when the situation requires to make a swift departure. on encountering these two, my mind will dictate that I do a swift about face and engage in swift movement toward the exit.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Clowns!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I enjoyed this very much Bill. You painted an extremely clear picture of the inner unhappiness of clown. Your 'stammering alliteration' worked very well. Kate xx
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I enjoyed this very much Bill. You painted an extremely clear picture of the inner unhappiness of clown. Your 'stammering alliteration' worked very well. Kate xx
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Kate
Comment from BethShelby
It is hot enough to melt the face off of a clown. You poem has the correct syllable count plus some great alliteration. Poor clown I guess he had a sad face painted on to began with and now he's weary and weeping. Where the picture we've come to expect? Nicely done. Leave it to our imagination.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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It is hot enough to melt the face off of a clown. You poem has the correct syllable count plus some great alliteration. Poor clown I guess he had a sad face painted on to began with and now he's weary and weeping. Where the picture we've come to expect? Nicely done. Leave it to our imagination.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Beth. I felt a picture would be redundant (as well as tough to find).
Comment from Boogienights
Not a happy picture you paint with your words, but really interesting. Isn't it amazing how a poet can take a handful of words and turn it into something cool. Thank you for sharing your talent. :)
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Not a happy picture you paint with your words, but really interesting. Isn't it amazing how a poet can take a handful of words and turn it into something cool. Thank you for sharing your talent. :)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you, BN, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Bill,
I like your choice of words in this unique poem.
I imagine a smeared face, or someone who has lost faith in life.
Clever use of words.
Good luck
Blessings
Cindy.
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Bill,
I like your choice of words in this unique poem.
I imagine a smeared face, or someone who has lost faith in life.
Clever use of words.
Good luck
Blessings
Cindy.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Cindy.
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