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a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Cindy Decker 2
Bill,
Your words and photo make me think of how I used to feel about poetry. (Maybe this is not your intention here).
I like the mixture of poetic forms, and as an optimist, I think maybe a great cake will turn out after being heated.
Good luck with this one, Bill.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
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lyenochka
Sounds like you were playing with your grandchildren and this poem was inspired. I'm glad that you can pat these poetic forms together from the "wet dirt bakery!"
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
Thanks, Helen. The kids were here for two days while our daughter preps for a family cruise.
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