Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

This is an excellent sad tribute to wallflowers everywhere. Zinnia is fragile and like Elenore Rigby, she waits with a face in a jar by the door. I love your rhythm and rhyme combination. The flow and meter work well.
Lonely old maids wither just as a flower petal does. The beautiful picture is well suited for this poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Your talented potential is growing.
Jesse

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022

You have understanding of my poem which is very rewarding. Thanks Jesse

reply by Jesse James Doty on 26-Jun-2022

You're welcome.
I call them as I see them.
Jesse

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem is so sad for both the woman and the townspeople. If she only came out or someone tried to get to come out maybe they could learn a lot about from each other. The loneliness of the single old lady could be lessened if fear could be fought off.
This poem is smoothly metered and well rhymed.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022

It is sad isnt it? She just needs one brave person to reach out and break the ice. She probably has alot to offer.

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Jun-2022

It always takes just one person.
Joan

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022

Yes, exactly. That's why every life is so important; you could be that person.

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022

I had the work of writer Joyce Carol Oates in mind when I wrote this poem. She often writes about eccentric people.

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Jun-2022

Judith Ann,
Though I am an avid reader, I haven't read any of her books. Can you reccommend one for me.
Joan

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022

The first novel I read by her is called " Them". After that I was a huge fan. It was a difficult read but soo good!

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Jun-2022

Thanks, Judith Ann. I'll try it.
Joan

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022

Now im thinking i may re-read it this summer...
Tx to you