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Random Rhyme and Petty Prose

Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "An Acrostic to Rule Them All"
a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

15 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, your words brought a smile to my face though all the while I was so very intrigued by the definitions of your stanzas that relate to the title, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
    Thank you, kahpot
Comment from judiverse
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Not worth losing sleep over. Many times, it seems to me, poetry is just pretty words strung together with rhyme, whether they make sense or not.
I like the rhyme of poetry and knowetry. Very effective use of wording to reflect the intellectual tone aspired to--transcendental homilies, ethereal epiphanies. Very elegant. Sounds like you had fun with this. judi

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Judi. This acts as an introduction for the following collection of poems, flash fiction, and some nonfiction.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Our motivation is really important and it that dies we have no reason to live, without faking it, we need to be positive about life and forge forward, there is no turning back, much enjoyed, a poignant write Bill, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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This deserves a six star rating, Bill and so it shall be. MY, My, This took some time and research for just the perfect word to fit in so many ways. LOL Well done my friend. Amazing! Nancy:)

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
    Thank you, Nancy.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Bill,
This is a great sardonic view of poetry. I found a little of myself in your words.
Your carefully written words are positive to the writer, in their negativity.
Great work.
Good luck!
Cindy

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Cindy. I?m only referring to my stuff, of course.
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 26-Jun-2022
    😊
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I'll get in at the start for this book, Bill. This is a fun, nonsensicle, wonderful peice of acrostic poetry, and I will look forward to reading them all. What gave you the idea for this one?? Love it. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
    I have lots of random thoughts that are undefined, so I decided to wrangle them here. Thank you, Sandra, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Gloria ....
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Oh so you have started a book, and by the sounds of it, Random Rhyme and Petty Prose is going to be a treat.

I love the allusion to Lord of the Rings. And your acrostic puts out the deliverables.

The ALL is very amusing ... Loss of sleep for no reason.

Looking forward to more. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
    Thank you, Gloria. If I could write like you, I?d give up the goofy stuff and entertain the world as you do. You are the best.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Not knowing the first thing about poetry, I just have to hope the poets can either put me to thinking, which isn't always a good thing, or put a smile on my face. And you have a special way of doing both. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Ric. Just having fun.
Comment from nomi338
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Yes, okay, but is the loss of sleep worth it in the end? At my age and in my current state, there is nothing more important than a good night's sleep. Of course it could be said that at my age, I will be sleeping uninterrupted soon enough.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
    We?ll all be ghost writing eventually.
reply by nomi338 on 26-Jun-2022
    Boo to you too.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Attempts to find motive will
Likely end with Loss of sleep for no reason.
How in the world did you get such idea to write your
acrostics
Smiles to you Bill Scott
Gert

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Gert
reply by Gert sherwood on 25-Jun-2022
    You are most welcome Bill Schott
    Gert