Children are Children
Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from karenina
My "children" are in their forties now. Still, I have grands that bless me every day and I appreciate your poem...
It's incredible how quickly time flies!
We ought to remember to cherish every day of their youth!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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My "children" are in their forties now. Still, I have grands that bless me every day and I appreciate your poem...
It's incredible how quickly time flies!
We ought to remember to cherish every day of their youth!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you! I agree with you!
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Great write, Raul!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Thank you for participating I this contest. It should be interesting to read on and find the final conclusion from differing points of view. Good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for participating I this contest. It should be interesting to read on and find the final conclusion from differing points of view. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you and for the good luck! I need it. I hope I win.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces exuberance as an innate insuppressible covert phenomenon in children.
The work highlights their fun loving and hilarious nature and need to be cautious, while putting them on the right track.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with child upbringing.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces exuberance as an innate insuppressible covert phenomenon in children.
The work highlights their fun loving and hilarious nature and need to be cautious, while putting them on the right track.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with child upbringing.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you!
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Remain Blessed.
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Comment from Anne Johnston
Your words are so true. I am afraid that in our world today, children are being made to grow up too soon - when it comes to clothing choices, etc.
Like your words:
"give them time for them to change into adults,
I know that it's not smooth sailing,
but enjoy their childhood at the moment,
because it won't last and it'll rapidly disappear.
They will figure it out."
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Your words are so true. I am afraid that in our world today, children are being made to grow up too soon - when it comes to clothing choices, etc.
Like your words:
"give them time for them to change into adults,
I know that it's not smooth sailing,
but enjoy their childhood at the moment,
because it won't last and it'll rapidly disappear.
They will figure it out."
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you!
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You are welcome
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A nice poem for the contest. The gist of what I got out of it was that adults and parents should give children to enjoy their childhood years. Go easy on them as you say. Soon enough those childhood playful times will disappear as they become adults. In addition, they will slowly figure out the realities of life.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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A nice poem for the contest. The gist of what I got out of it was that adults and parents should give children to enjoy their childhood years. Go easy on them as you say. Soon enough those childhood playful times will disappear as they become adults. In addition, they will slowly figure out the realities of life.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you!
