Twister
A tornado warning3 total reviews
Comment from Kroface
You used a nice big word which is always a challenge in these short poems. Well done. You also managed to give the twister a personality; its the one craving destruction - and i think this is wonderfully evocative!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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You used a nice big word which is always a challenge in these short poems. Well done. You also managed to give the twister a personality; its the one craving destruction - and i think this is wonderfully evocative!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I do not like the looks of that storm even in a picture. I am terrified of storms. I hate to hear thunder or see lightening. It is so dangerous. It would not take much to be killed in a thunder storm. Thank you for the awareness.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I do not like the looks of that storm even in a picture. I am terrified of storms. I hate to hear thunder or see lightening. It is so dangerous. It would not take much to be killed in a thunder storm. Thank you for the awareness.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I wrote it while my area was under a severe thunderstorm warning. Scary! Thanks for the review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
This is an apt and scary description of a tornado. You did a good job describing this in just seventeen syllables. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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This is an apt and scary description of a tornado. You did a good job describing this in just seventeen syllables. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks for the review and the good wishes!